A Little Beat - A Poetic Drabble From Across The Seas - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This is really beautiful.. Each word had a deep meaning, and together it fit so perfectly..

Thank you for the pm Saima..


You're beautiful!


Thank you!

'..fit so perfectly...'

Aww!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Zanutix



A rhythm so pure
A rhythm so divine

A little flutter
A little beat
That's all I need
To feel alive

I want him not, I want him still
Is it now time I let off my will

He knows me not, he knows me still
Has he now come to make his kill

My beating heart
Fast-breaking
It hurts so much
Knowing its truth

He marked me his
But knows not he this

It hurts so much
My beating heart

He never was mine, I never was his
How then did it come to this?

The entire drabble was beautiful, but these parts just kinda stood out.
Stood out a lot.

Amazing.

Oh Dawg, just admit it!
After reading The Dark Drabble, anyone could guess that it's your work!
Please admit it, will you?

Sis Saima, did she give it to you due to format problems?
If yes, then its acceptable.
Otherwise, I'm angry, dawg.

Why do you not come out of your cocoon?
Why do you not take credit?

Anyway, I love you for this, especially.
But this does not mean that I'm not angry!

Hmpffh!

Mwah!


Zanu!

Dawg!


Your dawg won't take credit where it is not due! But she's taking 'em here but not in its entirety 'coz then that would be wrong. Coz this work is as much mine as it is Sis Saima's!

Those words you picked out truly are a collaboration, the same way the entire drabble is.

And you know I don't lie!


Nor do I bluff.


Sis Saima on the other hand!!!!


Please ask her to admit!

And take credit!


And yeah...I love you seven much more!! What? hehe

MWAH RIGHT BACK ATCHA DAWG!


Woof you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: benaz

Heya! Thanks for posting such a nice poem. It was truly wonderful!😊


Yes.not only did she post it...she kinda also had a hand in penning the words to this poem!!!

Thanks so much for reading!!

Mwah!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


You tell her Zanu

She would not budge so I posted it for her took three days of trying to convince her but gave up lol

She does write amazingly

See Einstein you don't listen to me then listen to Zanu

Thank you 😊


Tell me what??

No!


I'll tell her.


Zanu. mah dawg. LISTEN TO ME YOU!

This drabble is a collaboration! We did it together. TOGETHER!

Teamwork!

And yes it's amazing. Coz we rock. And we're amazing so the drabble too is!

Zanu. You trust me right?

I demand loyalty!

Otherwise. There's no Team FarZanu (so what if I made the name up this instant?)




What Zanu you jealous of team me and Sis Saima?

Team FarZanu is way cooler.

Take that Sis Saima!



*okay OKAY don't take that! I love you both!*


*I see Navi coming from somewhere...RUNS FOR DEAR LIFE!*

*I FEEL SO LOVED!*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Zanutix


Oh God.
How can someone be SO modest?!
She writes extremely amazingly. 😃
I don't think dawg's gonna listen to me either. 😕


This is getting oddly repetitive.


Bla bla here and a bla bla there


Here a bla there a bla

Everywhere bla bla...



I love you guys.


But...



Please don't do this to me!


I mean. Me and modest? Me?


Sis Saima is the modest one!


Not taking ANY credit whatsoever for something which she has worked equally for!

I won't say worked equally hard...coz words and Sis Saima is like sky and clouds.


Mwah both of you. But ab bas!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

That was lovely! 😊


Thank you so much!!

Btw!!!!


I love Wahi too!!!!!


He's really adorable!


Hayyyeee!



Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Yes!!!


Saima DEEE!!


See!


She can tell this is your work too!

Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


Tell me what??

No!


I'll tell her.


Zanu. mah dawg. LISTEN TO ME YOU!

This drabble is a collaboration! We did it together. TOGETHER!

Teamwork!

And yes it's amazing. Coz we rock. And we're amazing so the drabble too is!

Zanu. You trust me right?

I demand loyalty!

Otherwise. There's no Team FarZanu (so what if I made the name up this instant?)




What Zanu you jealous of team me and Sis Saima?

Team FarZanu is way cooler.

Take that Sis Saima!



*okay OKAY don't take that! I love you both!*


*I see Navi coming from somewhere...RUNS FOR DEAR LIFE!*

*I FEEL SO LOVED!*


Ohkay, I believe you.
Happy now?

Sigh.

FarZanu? Hey! Hey! Did you notice?
Far-Za..? 😉
Anyway, awesome name dawg. I likes it.

I love you both a lot too! 🤗

Oh, hey Navi!

*someone's got some serious explaining to do dawg!*

Mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


Zanu!

Dawg!


Your dawg won't take credit where it is not due! But she's taking 'em here but not in its entirety 'coz then that would be wrong. Coz this work is as much mine as it is Sis Saima's!

Those words you picked out truly are a collaboration, the same way the entire drabble is.

And you know I don't lie!


Nor do I bluff.


Sis Saima on the other hand!!!!


Please ask her to admit!

And take credit!


And yeah...I love you seven much more!! What? hehe

MWAH RIGHT BACK ATCHA DAWG!


Woof you!


Dawg!!!

Since I love you and Sis Saima a lot, I agree.
Okay, this IS a collaboration!

You don't lie.. or do you? 😳
JUST KIDDING!

I'll ask Sis Saima when we'll talk in private.

*Yep, jealous? jealous?!*

WOOF YOU DAWG.

And miss you too!

Where ARE you??????


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix


Dawg!!!

Since I love you and Sis Saima a lot, I agree.
Okay, this IS a collaboration!

You don't lie.. or do you? 😳
JUST KIDDING!

I'll ask Sis Saima when we'll talk in private.

*Yep, jealous? jealous?!*

WOOF YOU DAWG.

And miss you too!

Where ARE you??????



Zanu we so need to have that convo in private lol

Mwah love you too little sis, hope all is well with u

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