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Tamara27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Loving the suspense!

Truly, I'm completely hooked.

Argh, so Rihaan, hey...

👏

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: Tamara27
I'm sooo glad you decided to continue!
And I loved the suspense in this part. I don't get a great feeling about Rihaan... something is off there, but is the something related to Shahid? I'm so confused but loving the journey.

I love it that Zoya's lost the fight within her when it comes to Asad, and that thoughts of her keep him awake at night.

Nice catch having Zoya and Rihaan only "legally" wedded. Already, thats a huge "tell"

Now I'm wondering what anyone had to do with Asad and Ayaan's sister... hmmm, things are getting interesting.

Hey thanks for commenting...ur pm definetly added to this decision...

As for the suspense...I am trying my best to keep it so..lets c how that goes..but Im glad ur liking it so far..

As for being confused...I hope is being confused in a good way..n not like wat the crap is she writing😆

Rihaan...Shahid...Ayaan...they all have their place in the story...😉

Asad and Zoya..they dont want to but being together is fate😃

N fate will stop Zoya and RIhaan coming together..n everyone will sigh in relief now😆

Najma...she is the reason why Asad is here...bought the company..and moved to NY...to avenge her...

Thank u once again..for liking and commenting n being onboard with the story..means a lot😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Amazing update...👏

I m confuse between ayaan,rehaan and shahid...😕

Just love the update...😊

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😃

One of the 3 gal...😆

n thanks for liking the update...hope u enjoye the story as it goes...😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

i'm so glad you updated this quickly !
i have been harassing the like button for some time but all in vain my id isn't just appearing there!
awesome chapter !!
loved it dear!!!
geez man now i have doubts on everyone !!
mystery mystery mystery !!!
my head will burn if i think too much !!
i think zoya screamed becoz she thought that asad was rihaan !
zoya must be upto something !
do continue soon :)

and yeah ! a story on a writer and a rockstar !!!
that'll be awesome !!

Thank for ur lovely lovely comment..just made me smile readin it...n confusion is part of the story...soon it will strat falling into place...so stay tuned...and keep liking n commenting...It makes my day😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Hi Aashna thank u so much for this wonderful update.
I told u you will be back soon with a bang ,the only prb is to change ur mind set.Now see what happened,u came back just after 20 days😃.I am so happy that u got ur charm back👏👏👏

I love ur all stories Turn around was one of my favourite one.

And in this update except Zoya all have some certain motive.

1)Ayaan whats he up to?Whats he looking for in Zoya's cabin?😕

2)Asad he is for his sister.What happened to her & whats that related to his work?🥱

his direction and his single minded drive. Justice, for his sister.

3)Who's plan is this?Is it Rehan's?

4)Shahid.What may be Shahid's matter.Who destroyed him?

And in whole case Rehaan gives me bad wibes cause he is misery man.Some thing is off with him.The first time he lose his calm when Ayaan caught up😲.I had a feeling that rehaan is up to some thing big.I hope our Asad Miya will rescue Zoya from him.😳

And about our Zoya's screeming im sure she must be in a lingerie to seduce Rehaan and must be waiting for him😉.And our hero's entry happened tadaaa😆

And Aashna ur re-entry was dhamakedaar darling👏.I am waiting for ur daily updates.And im interested in ur rockstar-writer story.Cause i love ur stories and ur writing styles.And i love to read asya stories so so much.Right now its an obsession for me.I miss my Asya & my Kabhi and its the only way to remembering those lovely memories.

Love u darling.Take care.And all the best for ur new story

WOW...WOW WOW WOW...wat a comment...WOW...it jsut made my day..n gal u have so mnay awesome things to say...n so so so many questions😆

Yes Zoya is completley clueless..she acts all collected...but she is not..n soon she will be in the middle of it all😆

Asad is here to avenge his sister..

Ayaan is looking for something..

Rihan is enjoying being boring...😆

Shahid is also looking for soemthing...

they all have and want something..😆

Does that confuse u more now??😉

Asad will always save Zoya even if he doesnt want to...but he will they are destined...to be together..

Lingerie it is..I am saying cos the next update is up..so ya..other than that..a few more questions are answered in the next update...so chk it out..other than than...

thank u a million times for ur support..ur encouraging words...n u liking my stories...means a lot a lot a lot to me...honestly...

As for the writer and the rockstart story...I will post something bout it soon...I am in dire need to write a love love love story...n this might just fulfill that desire..so stay tuned..!!!😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: -Vaishnavi-
Glad that u posted the chapter...
awesome chapter.. loved it...

continue soon! :D

Thanks a lot...m glad u enjoyed it..😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: nia.dhar
I was a great update...I'm glad you decided to continue your story...the suspense is building up really well and I can't wait for the next update...

thank u thank u thank u...m glad I didnt stop writing..n m glad..u enjpyed the update..more suspense on its way...😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
it was a mysterious update for me...this ayaan...i don't understand his motives...
rihaan is surely hiding something ...how the man panicked that ayaan touched his briefcase!!
shahid...sigh ...i don't understand him either!!

i guess that was another stupid seduction plan of zoya's at the end...lol

continue soon
hope you're continuing this...

O ya 3 shady guys...Zoya in the middle..Asad saving her...now thats wat the story is all about😆

and another stupid seduction plan...🤣..o ya so true...n it will be an epic fail 😆

thanks for a wonderful comment gal...always a pleasure readin it..😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
great update...

Thank u😊

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@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: jasminerose
Hey so glad to see you back with an update. Very Nice update.
Now I think Rehan is seriously upto something. I don't like him otherwise also😉

Are you hinting at the "seduce your husband " conversation.

Oh my dear Zoya always has Asad at her disposal whenever she is upto something.😆

Update soon.

A long update please. want things to move.

Enjoyed reading it.😊