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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing writer plz update soon...i want to know that how come asad cannot become father as well as lost his first child...if he cannot have his own child then he cannot have it only child that it...😕
you really confused me...i read earlier that relatinonship with woman was first time for asad...i though that asad and his first wife have never have such relation and zoya was first women...plz clear this doubt soon...thanks for pm and continue soon...😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitabaran

Amazing writer plz update soon...i want to know that how come asad cannot become father as well as lost his first child...if he cannot have his own child then he cannot have it only child that it...😕

you really confused me...i read earlier that relatinonship with woman was first time for asad...i though that asad and his first wife have never have such relation and zoya was first women...plz clear this doubt soon...thanks for pm and continue soon...😳😳

Haye nee you are so 😕😕😕

Chalo aaj tera confusion first I will clear

Asad said Acc to medical reports Asad can't become a father

Wo sab next update mein pata chalega

Asad did have sexual relation with his first wife Saira; What I wrote that it was not free to this extent. Their sex was within certain boundaries; the under the shower, the oral etc he did not experience with her. IN that way it was Asad's first experience.

Short mein bole toh Zoya was not his first like Asad was not her first.

Ye part clear ho gaya na ki Asad was not a virgin when he made love to Zoya.

The can't become abbu that will come in the next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
When will you update next part?? Dear, I m curious!! As you said that chapter 11 is not done!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zynia890

When will you update next part?? Dear, I m curious!! As you said that chapter 11 is not done!!

Na na na

Chapter 11 was done

I said scroll down for A/N it was big as it ahd images na so

Sorry to confuse you

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...
Oh god poor asad
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Na na na

Chapter 11 was done

I said scroll down for A/N it was big as it ahd images na so

Sorry to confuse you

Oh its OK!! No problem!! By the way when will you update next part??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! All those updates were fantastic!!!!!
Loved everything!!!!
Zoya's slowly growing feelings were beautiful!!
Asad's feelings were wonderful!!
Bechara asad !!! Was fooled by his own wife!!! Hehe!!
Dawat I see...hmmm you've done the story very realistic yet quite fictional too..

Awww...asad loves the baby!!!!
At first I thought why u werent mentioning the baby at all...up until the chapter 11...but now after reading everything completely...I understand the story solely being about the growing feelings of a man towards the woman whom he had been taking since her teenage...and also who thought of himself to be cursed for loving and being loved!!!

I really loved when asad cried under the shower!! That was so painful!!!

Hmm! Mr.Robotic khan to Mr.Romantic khan...that's cool!!!

Oh poor baby !!! I really don't like abortions...its really cruel to kill innocent babies...
Miscarriages are okay...but abortions are yuck!!!
I really wished zoya wouldn't take such decisions but she did...
Aww! Asad wants the baby!!! That's so lovely...
He already thinks of the baby as his own!!!

Hmph hmph!!!! I didn't like it when you have written.
"Asad mard nahi hai?"... no I did not!!
That's really bad to call a person to be not a Man or "Male" exactly ...just becoz he can't impregnate a woman.
...I feel that asad in all sense is a Man ...this is proved when in the ear twitching tactic and in the need to protect his wife and also in the need to give her all happiness,love and everything that he can do...this is just my POV ...that's all ...pls forgive me if I had done anything to hurt u!! I apologize my friend!!!

And also!! There were some "ahem" ahem" in chap 10 but me being a good girl ...skipped it as it a bit too mature for me!

Sorry I am too late in reading and commenting on all those parts...but I was stuck up with exams...sorry!!!!

Fabulous work!!!
Thanks for the pms
Update soonish please...
And also clear off the doubt and jealousy in zoya's mind about Saira...
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know Chahany ?
YOU
ARE
ABSOLUTELY
NOT
A
BECHARE
Again you know why ?
Cause you have zoya wale ideas like see ( asad Baap nahi ban sakta) who can think something like this besides you ?
BTW I know zoya's baby is a truly bechara or bechare but don't like it because of its father so hop to get rid of it ASAP .
Not to forget love the update as always & if you are not going to start another ff so plz make it as long as possible .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zynia890

Oh its OK!! No problem!! By the way when will you update next part??

22/4/14 11:14 am IST

Just begun to write I mean have so far written Chapter 12 bas itna hi

I update once a week and this is the last chapter so... ek week ka intezaar bas

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashrina

Wow!!! All those updates were fantastic!!!!!
Loved everything!!!!
Zoya's slowly growing feelings were beautiful!!
Asad's feelings were wonderful!!
Bechara asad !!! Was fooled by his own wife!!! Hehe!!
Dawat I see...hmmm you've done the story very realistic yet quite fictional too..

Awww...asad loves the baby!!!!
At first I thought why u werent mentioning the baby at all...up until the chapter 11...but now after reading everything completely...I understand the story solely being about the growing feelings of a man towards the woman whom he had been taking since her teenage...and also who thought of himself to be cursed for loving and being loved!!!

I really loved when asad cried under the shower!! That was so painful!!!

Hmm! Mr.Robotic khan to Mr.Romantic khan...that's cool!!!

Oh poor baby !!! I really don't like abortions...its really cruel to kill innocent babies...
Miscarriages are okay...but abortions are yuck!!!
I really wished zoya wouldn't take such decisions but she did...
Aww! Asad wants the baby!!! That's so lovely...
He already thinks of the baby as his own!!!

Hmph hmph!!!! I didn't like it when you have written.
"Asad mard nahi hai?"... no I did not!!
That's really bad to call a person to be not a Man or "Male" exactly ...just becoz he can't impregnate a woman.
...I feel that asad in all sense is a Man ...this is proved when in the ear twitching tactic and in the need to protect his wife and also in the need to give her all happiness,love and everything that he can do...this is just my POV ...that's all ...pls forgive me if I had done anything to hurt u!! I apologize my friend!!!

And also!! There were some "ahem" ahem" in chap 10 but me being a good girl ...skipped it as it a bit too mature for me!

Sorry I am too late in reading and commenting on all those parts...but I was stuck up with exams...sorry!!!!

Fabulous work!!!
Thanks for the pms
Update soonish please...

And also clear off the doubt and jealousy in zoya's mind about Saira...

Thank you

I know Asad is a complete man and just cause he is not able to impregnate a woman he is no less a man; but you know Zoya sochne se phle bolne se pehle kuch sochti hai???

Nahi re even I think abortion OK it depends on the person carrying th child but I can understand Zoya she wants to start fresh with Asad no reminder of Tariq

no need for @bold everyone has an opinion

Next chap which also is the last will clarify a lot

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