AsYa TS - You belong with me (Last Part)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: masteruni6
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Loved the whole update!
OMG ! Finally!
You updated yay!😃

Anyways liked how they were abt to kiss
but TANVEER!!!!!😡😡

Anyhoo ( yep i said tht. its deliberate )

They finally confessed !! wohooo !!!!
Loved the part where Zoya was like ,
'My cheeks were hurting becoz i was smiling so much'

Awww

Atleast you made them kiss at the end !

Lovely
Plz make more !!!

I am sooo super sorry

I know I promised to update sooner but once I re-read the first version it sucked so I re-wrote and that took a long time

but anyways thank youuu so much for taking the time out and reading my TS, really happy that you liked it so much😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: tapasidas
fantastic! I just loved the ending Asad pushing Tanveer out of his way, everyone staring at Zoya's new avatar and Asad thinking that he won becoz Zoya was present it was really sweet.

All credit goes to Taylor Swift because thats where I got the inspiration from,

Loved her in that music video, she was just too aweso😃me

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: p_s05
This TS was a cute read!

Thank youuu😃

I was just going for a nice light hearted story to write

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: zola007
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Finally they both confessed ! 😳
It was such a cute TS !
Thanks for the pm !
Do write more ! 😉😛

Its a love story buddy, of course they confessed

And I will be writing a new TS or OS (dont know yet) but that one, I am warning you now will be a lot more intense

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Awesome update. Loved every word you wrote. Please write more stories as I love your style.

Thanks buddy,

I will write more, I'm trying to write as much as I can for March break but when those 3 beautiful beautiful months of no school come, I will go crazy and just write probably everyday, I mean if QH is still even on then

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: --Radhika--
The last part was so cute! I loved their confession and how you explained their feelings. I was wondering what they thought during the video and you described them beautifully. 😳😳

The whole TS was so good! I am so sad it ended. 😭😭 Hehe you added another hashtag at the end! 😆 EW, Tanveer is so... 😡😡

Very nice TS, as for the next song suggestion, you should totally write that! I never heard that song but I know it's gonna be great! (:

Thanks a bunch for reading, liking as well as leaving me a long comment, means so much

And like I said hashtags are my life

And you should really listen to the song its so nice, but the story will be a ot more intense than this, but hopefully I will have it done and up soon