AsYa TS - You belong with me (Last Part)

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K so, as you can tell by the title I am a HUGE fan of Taylor Swift😆, so here is another OS(well this is a TS), inspired by her songs. If you guys would like me to write another OS or TS inspired by her songs just leave the song name in the comments below and I will definitely think of something.

Hope you enjoy😃


Part 1:


"Zoya come down, right this minute"

I heard my Appi, yell at me from the living room, I quickly think of all the "bad" things I've done throughout the day, trying to figure out what she may be mad at me for. Oops I think she discovered that I didn't wash the dishes for tonight. I sat up on my bed, as I took in a lungful of air and shouted

"I'm doing homework"

I slumped back on my blue and white bed resuming with my drawing. I don't know why but sketching always gives me piece, it allows me to express what I am feeling in my own way and I don't have to worry about others finding out my deepest darkest secrets. 5 minutes later, I heard voices and they were loud, it sounded like someone was having an argument, I rolled my eyes, guessing that it was Appi and Jeeju fighting over the remote, I sat up once again ready to shout at them but that's when I noticed him.

Walking back and forth with a frustrated look on his face was Asad Ahmed Khan, the most popular guy in St. Mary's High School. He had it all, the looks, the eyes, the amazing voice that could make every woman sigh. And sadly I was one of them. Why did his eyes always have to hypnotize me, why does his cute dimple always make my tummy do a flip, when they say "Love hurts" they ain't kidding. But has he ever noticed me in that way. nope. To him, I am just a good neighbor/friend, ehkh that name is a like curse, once you capture it, it won't leave you. Just a good old "friend" that he could share his feelings with, but hey something was better than nothing, right? But hey, I'm not complaing about the fact I'm his neighbor, I mean I get some pretty good shows early in the morning, a view so good that it should win an Oscar. I just hope he hasn't seen me shirtless.

I could tell that he was talking to his girlfriend, Tanveer. Just the thought of the two makes my heart shatter into pieces. I don't understand why he's even dating her, the girl doesn't have a heart, she knows nothing and I mean NOTHING about him except the amount of money he has in his account, and whenever I see the two together, their always arguing or Tanveer is trying to seduce him, but then again she is the captain of the cheerleading team, while I'm a sad loner.

#ForeverAlone

I remember back to when I found out that the two were dating, I found out from my friend Humeira, she was running up to me so excited as if she had won the lottery but as soon as I heard what she said it felt as if Hitler had came back to life. I was so devastated that day, I tried to avoid him, I didn't want him to get the feeling that I cared who he dated, or otherwise he just would have taken pity on me.

I snap out of my drooling session as I see him throw his phone at the wall, breaking it into pieces. Wow, nice relationship you got their. I thought with a giggle. I saw him sit down on his bed and face me, he gave me a small smile but it didn't reach his eyes. I flipped to a new, un-used page on my sketch book, and write "You okay?" on it, facing it towards him. This is how we communicate, pretty lame but like I said better than nothing, and plus whenever I do have to talk to him in person my heart starts to flutter and my throat goes on a holiday.

I waited impatiently, for him to show me his answer, finally having something written down, he turned it towards me. "Tired of drama". I turned my sketch book to face him which read "Sorry" with a frowny face, he just shrugged it off as if it meant nothing but I could tell by the hurt in his eyes it mean everything. At that moment I truly felt sorry for him, he has such a pure heart, and I'm not just saying that because I may or may not stalk him on Saturdays. Well technically I don't stalk him because he always comes to the orphanage where I go to on Saturdays, AFTER I get their. You see we both are orphans, he was able to get amazing parents while I got the most loving Appi and Jeeju. It was the first conversations we had, talking about how we both felt growing up, he told me that his dream was to become a child doctor so that he would be able to help out the kids who weren't as fortunate us. And I knew that moment I have fallen in love with him.

I turned to the back of my sketchbook and run my hands over the 3 beautiful words written on it. "I Love You". I take in a deep breath as I force myself to show him what I've been feeling about him all this time. I don't care whether this will harm our friendship or he will get weirded out by me at least I won't look back on this when I'm thirty with 15 cats thinking to myself "If only". I shut my eyes tightly and just flip the page making it face him, after waiting 5 seconds I saw nothing but his blue curtains covering the window.

*SIGH*

Well at least I tried, Zoya my friend, looks like you are stuck in the friend zone. I shake my head sadly but hey I wasn't gonna let it get the best of me, I don't need a man in my life to make me happy, even if he is cute and hot and has the perfect abs and can make you feel like... OH GOD. I grabbed my beats headphones blasting the volume,. I danced around to the music getting lost in my own world completely oblivious to the pair of eyes watching me with amusement and admiration.





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Alone111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.. He also loved her... ? It was lvly... Continue soon.. Thnks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tapasidas

Amazing! I wud luv to read a story on 'love story' or 'mine'.


I've actually already written an OS on love story here it is


please like or comment on it
nilusoni thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice... So both are orphans n share a friendly bond n both are oblivious of each other's love.. Cool.. Beautifully written .. 😊
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After reading this i have only one question in my mind, when are you gonna update next part?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!! 😃
Plz update next part soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the whole concept
Taylor Swift ! I love U Belong With ME
Its one of my fav songs!
Any way great update
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Dear,
This was so so good. Zoe is really adorable. Poor thing loves Asad but is stuck in the friends zone, well I guess things might change for better now.
I would have left a title for you to write cox I love reading your stuff but the problem is I don't hear this singer & so know nothing about his songs BUT I am looking forward to read more from you soon.
Love..
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Awesome and amazing concept...👏

Just love it...😊

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