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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Asad is ready for everything
Continue soon
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Nice update
I'm loving it 😃
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Just read this story. Very nice concept. Love it. Pls accept my buddy req and pm me when u give update. Update soon
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Sorry 4 the late. Here goes chapter 3...

CHAPTER 3:

SCHOOL:

After the next 3 periods everyone dispersed for lunch. They will always have lunch together in the canteen. Zain was really very much scared. Everyone was there in the canteen but for Zoya. Everyone was waiting for her. But Ayaan couldn't take it anymore.

Ayaan: Come on guys I'm starving. I can't wait any longer. I'm gonna start eating.

When he was about to open the box, Faizal snatched it.

Faizal: Wait till Zoya comes.

After some time Zoya came running.

Zoya: I'm so so so so sorry. Woh Science teacher told me to collect everyone's note.

When Ayaan was about to say something Zoya said

Zoya: Don't worry Ayaan I didn't take your note because I know you wouldn't have completed the notes.

Ayaan: Thanks Zoya.

Zoya: Why were you guys waiting for me? You all could have started eating right?

Ayaan: Woh hi toh main keh raha tha. They didn't listen me.

Asad: No Zoya we won't do anything without you. Zoya smiled at Asad and he smiled back. Asad moved a little so that Zoya could sit near him. Everyone started eating.

Zain: I'm really sorry Zoya.

Zoya: For what?

Zain: I didn't buy the tickets right?

Zoya: It's ok. I forgive you.

Zain: Thank you so much Zoya and I'll beg Ammi and we will go to the movie. Ok?

Zoya: Really???!!!

Zain: I promise. And they both hugged.

Ayaan: Oh come on. Ab yeh Bhai Behen ka pyaar baad mein kijiye. Please.

Asad: Shut up Ayaan. If you have a sister you will surely love her.

Ayaan: Whatever. And he shrugged his shoulders.

Both Asad and Zoya finished their lunch and went to wash their hands. After Zoya washed her hands she suddenly slipped on the water and was about to fall so, she closed her eyes. But, she felt a pair of arms which stopped her from falling down. She opened her eyes to find Asad holding her. They had an eyelock (Mitwa Ishq pe zor nahi). And when they were about to kiss Faizal stopped them.

Faizal: Sorry for spoiling your romance. But yeh school hai, so please... he said pointing to Asad who was holding Zoya. Then Asad left Zoya very quickly that she fell down (If u guys have watched Dilwale Dulhania le Jayenge film or if u have seen that Ruk Ja oh Dil Deewane song u would know where Shah Rukh will leave Kajol like that at the end of the song).

Zoya (angrily): OUCH!!! Aise kar ne ke liye you need not have caught me.

Asad: Sorry.

He turned to the basin to wash his hands.

Asad (to himself): Why did I do like this? Why am I not able to control myself when I look into her eyes? I was about to kiss her!!! Come on Asad control yourself.

And they left from there.

Zain: Why did you guys take this much time to just wash your hands?

Faizal: Woh kya hua na... and he saw Asad who was shaking his head to tell him not to say.

Faizal: Woh we met our teacher that's why.

Zain: Ok. But you guys missed something very interesting and funny. Hahahaha

Zoya: What happened?

Ayaan: Please don't say that!!!! Please!!!

Zain: He once ag... Ayaan kept his hand on Zain's mouth not allowing him to say.

Najma: Woh Ayaan one again got a slap from that same girl whom he flirted last week. Everyone started to laugh.

Ayaan: Woh wahi ladki thi kya?

Najma: Yes she is.

Everyone started to laugh again.

Ayaan: Wait a sec... he said and went to that girl.

He said something to the girl and she started to laugh. And Ayaan came back.

Zain wasn't able to believe so he asked Ayaan, "Abhe!!! What did you do to make her laugh?"

Ayaan: That's a business trick. I'll tell you later one day.

Zain: Business trick???!!! Tum kabhi nahi sudharoge.

After some time a girl came running towards Zain shouting his name.

The Girl: ZAIN!!!! Wahin ruko main aati hoon.

Zain (keeping his hands on his head): Oh no!!!! Woh phir se aa gayi, miss Blowhard.

Zoya: Miss Blowhard???

Zain: Haan. She has so many nicknames but most common is Blowhard. Woh kitni baat karti hai tumhe pata hai? Uska asli naam Sunaina hai. Pata nahi woh mujse kya chahati hai?

Ayaan: Aise mat kaho yaar. Woh kitni cute lag rahi hai.

Zain: Cute toh lagegi par, she is a chatterbox.

Zoya: Zain? Tum iss school mein kitne popular ho, she may be one among the fans you have.

Zain: Par Asad bhi famous hain na, why does she bother only me?

And the girl came to Zain and started to talk. Everyone were shocked to see that how much the girl talks. After some time the bell rang.

Zain (to himself): Thank God bell rang but she will start again in the class. Oh come on man!!!

Zain: Achcha hum class mein baath kar te hain. Bye. Saying so he turned and Sunaina left.

Asad: Ab toh tum bach gayi par class mein toh... congrats yaar.

Zain: Stop teasing me man.

And everyone left to their respective classes.

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That's it guys. I know its boring but, hang on. I somehow managed to bring some Asya romance. Plz plz plz send ur feedback, I really need it. Plz plz plz feel free 2 comment I won't feel bad if u comment it wasn't nice. Plz tell me if the story needs ant improvement. I'll try 2 update the next chapter within this month. Buddy me for PM. Bye. Take care 😊

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CHAPTER 4: Page 10

Edited by dranzer007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute update... everyone wait for zoya...
before start eating...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it
Thanks for the PM
Do countinue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update. Love it.
Please try to update soon i really forget what happened in previous 2 parts. Thanks for pm. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
All waiting for zoya to come & start eating
Lovely mitwa moment between asya
Continue soon
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