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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey it's interesting ... Plss continue soon and pm me 😃
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Nice update
Naughty & sleepy zoya
Strick asad.
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: Linsie

continue and pm me...


I'll surely PM u if u r my buddy. If u rn't plz buddy me
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Hey guys!!! Here's 2nd chapter. I've added 2 more character:

Ayaan Shaik:

Classmate of Zoya and friend of everyone. Not too good in studies.

Humeira Siddiqui:

Classmate and best friend of Zoya and Ayaan.

CHAPTER 2:

AT SCHOOL:

Zain: Zoya ruko. Tum phir se lunch bag ko car pe hi chod di.

Zoya: Sorry and thanks. Tum 3D film ke liye ticket book kar diya na?

Zain (to himself): Oh ho!!! Main toh mazak kar raha tha, yeh seriously le liya.

Zoya: Kya hua?

Zain: Woh... actually...

Zoya: Allah miya what's wrong with you??!!! Tum bhi Asad ki tarah kyun kar rahe ho. Tum ticket book kar diya na?

Zain: Woh... kya hai na ki...

Just then the bell rings

Zoya: OMG!!! Prayer toh shuru hone wala hai. Hum uske bare mein break mein baath kat tein hain. Bye. And she ran off to her class.

Zain (to himself): Ab toh main bach gaya par, break mein kya karoon?

8th STD B' - Zoya's Classroom:

Ayaan: Hi Zoya. Good morning!!!

Zoya: Hi Ayaan. Good morning!!!

Ayaan: Zoya jandi se tumhare Maths note do, main jaldi se answers copy kar ke de deta hoon.

Zoya: Uff oh Ayaan!!! Tum kabhi bhi homework complete kar ke nahi aaogi kya.

Ayaan: Main kya karoon Zoya, teachers toh woh sums nahi de rehen hain joh main jaantha hoon.

Zoya: Oh come on!!! Teacher won't give addition or subtraction any more. You've grown up.

Ayaan: Tum nahi degi toh kya main Humaira se le tha hoon. Humeiraaa...

Humeira: Kabhi nahi Ayaan.

Ayaan: Oh come on guys!!!

10TH STD C - Asad and Zain's Classroom:

Rohan (he is not a new character): Ready for the Science test guys.

Zain: Science test?

Rohan: Haan ma'am ne bathaya tha na.

Zain: Main toh bhool hi gaya.

Rohan (shouting): So first time in history Zain is going to get a zero in test. YAAAHOOO!!!!

Zain: Mr. Rohan, please over exicted hone ke liye koi zaroorat nahi. Tumhe toh mere memory ke baare mein toh patha hai na. It's enough if I just go through the lesson once.

Rohan: Woh bhi toh hai na. And what about you Asad? Ready for the test?

Zain: Uff oh!!! Tujhe toh pata hai Asad ke bare mein. He is always prefect in everything.

Rohan: You are right. Saying so he went.

Asad: Zain tum hamari yellow house ke basketball team ke list banaliya kya?

Zain: No.

Asad (shocked): KYA??!!! Abhe sports day aane wala hai aur tum itne cool baite ho. Tujhe basketball team ke vice captain banana nahi chahiye tha mujhe.

Zain: Just cool Asad. Main hoon na?

Asad: You have just a week to complete the job given to you or else you know what punishment you will get right?

Zain: Yes I do. Don't worry I will complete it as soon as possible.

Then the bell rang and the classes started. After first 3 periods got over everyone dispersed for snack break.

AT SCHOOL GROUND:

Asad, Zoya, Faizal, Zain, Najma, Humaira and Ayaan meet everyday at school ground during break.

Asad: How were your classes guys?

Faizal: A bit boring.

Zoya and Humeira: It was awesome.

Ayaan: AWESOME???!!! Are you guys serious? Kitna boring tha. Aur woh kadus wala Maths teacher toh hamesha ki tarah mujhe punishment dete hi rahetain hain.

Zoya: Tum agar hamesha ki tarah homework nahi karoge toh woh punishment hi denge.

Ayaan: Whatever.

Asad: Zoya, tumhara basketball team kaisa hai. Have you decided the team members?

Zoya: All most.

Faizal: Aur Asad, hamara team?

Asad: Yeh bevakoof ladka toh decide hi nahi kiya. I've given him a week's time, if he doesn't decide the team till then, you will be the vice captain.

Faizal: Please mujhe koi captain vaptain nahi banna.

Zoya: Main toh bhool hi gayi. Zain tum 3D film ke liye ticket book kar diya na?

Zain: Zoya woh main jhoot bhola tha... hum 3D film ke liye nahi ja rahen hai. Sorry.

Zoya: KYA???!!! Hum nahi ja rahen hai???!!!

Zain: Yes. And Zoya started to chase Zain. By then the bell rang.

Zoya: Ab toh bach gayi par lunch mein toh dekh the hain tum kaise bachogi. Bye.

Zain: Bye.

And everyone went to their classes.

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I know that it was boring. You can comment however you feel it is. Buddy me for PM. Take care. Bye.

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CHAPTER 3: Page 7

Edited by dranzer007 - 11 years ago
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Thank You very much
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great update
interesting
asad is all strict and all
zain is dead😆
zoya is so angry
do continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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thanks for the pm...



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zain have to save himself.. fom zoya...

coz he lied
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waiting for more interesting part... to come on board...

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