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Sorry 4 the late. So, here goes the 1st chapter.

CHAPTER 1:

FAROOQUI MANSION:

Zainad: Zoya beta utt jao. School jaana hai na.

Zoya: Nahi Ammi. Mujhe aaj school nahi jaana hai.

Zainad: School nahi jaana hai??!!! Aaj toh test ke papers dene wale hain, hai na? Tujhe jaana hi hoga.

Zoya: Woh main kal bhi collect karlungi. Tujhe toh pata hai na mein kaise padhthi hoon. I'm 100% sure ki mein achchi marks hi loongi.

Zainad: Par tujhe school jaana hi hoga.

Zoya: NO!!! NO!!! NO!!!

Zainad: Tum aisi nahi manogi. Mujhe Zain ko hi bhulana padega.

Zoya (covering her face with the blanket): Bhulalo.

Zainad (going downstairs from Zoya's room and shouted): ZAIN BETA JAO, JAAKE HAMARI BEGUM SAAHIBA KO UTTHAO!!!!!!!

Zain (shouting back from his room): Ji Ammi ek minute.

He went to Zoya's and saw her face covered with the blanket.

Zain: Ahem!!!! Ahem!!!!

Zoya: Kya?

Zain: School ke liye late ho raha hai uttho.

Zoya: Mujhe nahi jaana.

Zain: Kyun?

Zoya: Mujhe nahi jaana matlab nahi jaana. That's it.

Zain: Ok mat aao. Main toh soch raha tha ki, hum aur baakhi sab aaj school ke badh woh nayi 3D film hai na usko dekh ne ke liye chalenge. Par, change of plan hum tujhe chodke chalenge. Mera paise bhi bachega na.

Zoya was surprised.

Zoya (jumping from the bed): KYA??!!! 3D film?

Zain: Han. Par, tu toh nahi aa rahi ho na.

Zoya: Maine kab aisa kaha. Main bhi aa rahi hu.

Zain: Really?

Zoya: Really

Zain: Promise?

Zoya: Promise.

Zain: Toh jao, jaake school ke liye ready ho jao.

Zoya: Main 30 minutes mein aathi hun.

After 30 minutes they had their breakfast and left to Khan Mansion which was just near their house.

KHAN MANSION:

Dilshad: NAJMA!!! BETA JANDI AAO BERAKFAST TAIYAR HAI!!! AUR ZOYA AUR ZAIN BHI AANE WALE HAIN!!!

Najma came running downstairs.

Najma: Woh aa gaye kya?

Dilshad: Nahi par aane ka waqt ho gaya.

Just then the door bell rang.

Faizal: Main jaake dekh tha hoon.

He went to the door and opened it.

Faizal: Ammi sleeping dadi aur Zain aiye hain.

Zoya: Sleeping dadi kis ko bola?

Faizal:Obviously tumhe hi bola maine. 24/7 sothe hi rah thi ho.

Zoya: What??!!! Main tujhe zinda nahi chodungi. And she started chasing him. They ran all over the house and suddenly Faizal bumped into someone. It was the one and only Asad Ahmad Khan.

Asad: Aap dono kabhi jagadna bandh karenge. Bade hogye tum dono, stop fighting like kids.

Faizal and Zoya (together): Sorry.

Then everyone had their breakfast and left for school together.

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That's the 1st chapter guys. Sorry 4 not adding more of Asad scenes. Was it good? Feel free 2 comment. I won't feel bad if u tell it was not good. It will take time 4 me 2 update 2nd chapter. Buddy me for PM. Take care till then. Bye.

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Chapter 2: Page 5

Edited by dranzer007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
great update
zoya is so stubborn and naughty
she is so cute
asad is always the strict one
do continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so small part...anyhow loved it...next time v want big part pls
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Luvd zoya she is so cute nyc 1 cntinue soon
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you got 31 likes. ... so you have to continue super fast...
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i like childhood story of asya... continue soon
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Character Sketch... intro nice... zoya is the naughty one...

Asad is the akdu...
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Chapter 1...

so cute between zain and zoya

faizal calling zoya sleeping dadi... so funny
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chapter 1... i like the update... so funny and cute
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