Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14*

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Oh zoya was unbelivable 😔 😎
Nice
nd pls update deceitful voves pls pls

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Great update!!

Asad is so ruthless!! But he seems like a different person where Zoya is concerned 😛

Loved his fight with Zoya!

Zoya is so adorable!

Continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

Edited by ChamakChallo91 - 11 years ago

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

nice update😊

it was really amusing to see zoya screaming at the AAK whom the world fears

ur description of his every move and emotion when he was with the doctor was really good

looking forward for the next update

thanks for the pm😊

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Awesome update...
Zoya is soo cute... She is screaming on asad 😆 zoya can never change...
As ad & his ocd... Loved it...
Looking forward 4 next update... Update soon
... Thanks 4 pm 😊

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

awesome update

i loved it

zoya screaming att AAk 😲

Lol ppl fears from him n she shouted 😲👏

thanks for the pm

update soon😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Awesome updates...👏

Both parts are amazing...👍🏼

In part a u describe asad as a gangster so well...😊

In part b asya little and funny fights r awesome just love it...😉

Waiting egarly for nxt part so update soon...😃

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a.sharma

@a.sharma

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Chalo koi to aaya asad ko control karne wala and chillake hi sahi use control karne wala... a very well written part... i just love both the sides of asad, the patient one with zoya and the ruthless being that he actally is... awesome...

lots of praises from my side

will be eagerly waiting for the next update.

until next time keep writing and updating

a.sharma