Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14* - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update soon please 😃
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nc update
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cnt soon
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Pls update...pls don't punish your existing readers...pls pls pls update...I just live your stories
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Thank you every one! For all your support 😊

A very very happy birthday KARAN baby! May god bless you with all the happiness of life and may you get whatever you aspire for! May you have many many more successful soaps and films ahead and you rule the world!!!

M sorry ksgians, although, this update is for all of you as a gift for today which is obv. a very special day for all of us, I had to make asad a bit grey in this part. Well, story demands it guys... I hope you all like the part. This is an installment as the part was turning out to be very long.
Enjoy 😊

FIFTY SHADES OF ASAD AHMED KHAN : Part 1

It had been 3 weeks since zoya was staying with asad. A lot was changed in her life. Her first day was the only day when she saw asad with some emotions on his other wise stone face. She had joined khan enterprise the very next day of her arrival and True to his words, asad had treated her as his secretary in the office. She had befriended everyone there and back home, the only one she talked to was anwar kaka. After few days, Asad too was back to himself. The rude and cold asad. He made sure zoya wasn't allowed to come out of her room when he was back. Her dinner and breakfast was served in her room only. He also had made himself completely distant from her and refrained himself from having any sort of communication, other than official work ofcourse. There were times when zoya would face asad's wraths for no fault of hers and This irked her the most. This man,zoya thought was certainly one of his kind! Or JUST A SINGLE PIECE god by mistake created! Zoya at first,For obvious reasons hated him. But the thing which she couldn't pin point till date was reasons for her heart's fluttering everytime asad was near. The most delusional situation she ever came across! There was no doubt that she had this extreme disliking towards Asad ahmed khan but at the same time, she couldn't deny that she had a crush on him. Well, he indeed was the epitome of perfection. But how on earth could some one hate and like the same person at the same moment of time!It was only after last week that her hate' turned into terror, when all her butterflies went missing, when her heart completely stopped reacting in any manner, when asad, all red in rage , hit her with all his might . She was thrown inside a dark small room and was deprived of the food. No one, absolutely no one was allowed to go to the room except asad.. Those days, zoya had witnessed the worst side of his. This frightened zoya to an extent where she was afraid of her own shadow. Gone was the chirpy little zoya who she used to be. The memories were crystal clear even today .


She remembered how asad saw her standing outside his room , trying to listen his conversations on phone to get some clue. Actually since few days, zoya was a bit uncomfortable with his presence. Not because of her stupid hormones but because of the way asad eyed her. She was no stupid to NOT get that. His eyes spoke volumes. So she needed to implement her plan to escape his kingdom as soon as possible. And hence decided to eavesdrop hoping to gather some information that could help . But her luck was not in favor and asad caught her. He bristled with the rage when he saw her. His eyes threw draggers as he yelled in a voice filled with anger.

"How dare you come here" .

Zoya gulped as she had never seen asad this livid. Leave asad, she had never seen anyone this angry. Aryan had given him a princess environment throughout her life. Witnessing it for the first time, made her shudder in fear and her voice betrayed her. She tried telling him but nothing came out. Asad seethed in anger as he once again asked her, pulling her hair harshly making her wince in pain. And this was the last straw and zoya pushed him back with whatever strength she had. But she was timid and weak. Her all attempts were futile as asad who was way too strong for her didn't move an inch and remained as still as iron wall.

"You are hurting me mr. khan"

her voice quivered in pain and she once again tried loosen his grip. But he didn't let her go. Instead, strengthen his grip and pulled her close. Very close to him. His eyes were red with enrage as he made her look at him.

"I asked you, not to leave your room. Then WHY ARE YOU HERE?"

With each word, his voice thundered.


"YOU CANNOT TREAT ME LIKE A DIRT. DO YOU GET THAT? YOU HEARTLESS CREATURE! I DID NOTHING WRONG"

Zoya screamed at the top of her voice. She was taught, never to let anyone control and punish you with no mistake of yours. And this was not the first time asad was hurting her. There were times when he was too rude and offensive. But being the kind of girl zoya was, she ignored him but not today. There was no wrong in coming out of room and asad had physically hurt her and this, she couldn't take it. But her shouting did not help as asad's fury rose to a new level and in no time, her cheeks burnt in pain as asad slapped her with all his might. For a sec. zoya went numb. The force was too strong to handle and her lips bled. Before she could recover from the earlier shock , she felt herself being dragged ruthlessly . Asad pushed her inside a dark store room and locked it. The next thing she remembered was anwar kaka standing infront of her with a first aid box.

ooo


"Zoya beta.."

Anwar came in with a first aid box in his hand. He was an old man..must be in his late 50s and was working for asad from past 10 years. He was probably the only soul who wasn't scared of asad. Reasons, no one knew. If there was any one whom Asad ahmed khan could listen to, was him and anwar himself had always tried to be a fatherly figure to him.
Knowing asad well, Anwar had seen this coming, after witnessing asad and zoya's encounters. Although he didn't know for what reason zoya had been kept here, he knew asad was surely upto something big..but What exactly, he didn't know. He felt sorry for the poor girl who was under a false impression. Zoya was certainly not the first girl asad had brought to the house. But she was way too young for being a kept' for heaven's sake.. But if asad had got her for him, why he gave her a separate room?
These days Asad was hopping mad.. His eyes, not only reflected anger but also hatred! Hatred to such an extent, that he slapped her.!!.Even though every one in the house was well aware of the fact that who exactly Asad ahmed khan was,they too were shocked beyond their wits as asad had never raised his hand on women. But then again, why did he ask him to get her food then, after two whole days?
Anwar's heart cried for zoya. He could only pray for this pure innocent soul. Seeing her wound, he decided to atleast clean it up and give her proper medication as he too was supposed to leave before asad came back.

"Beta..here..let me help you.." He said

Zoya for a moment was startled seeing anwar in her room. Hadn't mr. khan asked every one not to come to me? Her already distressed heart once again shook in fear and she curled up more into herself.

"Don't be scared my child, I have come to clean your wound"

She heard the elderly man who stood at the door with some thing in his hand. When she didn't say a word, anwar came inside and sat beside her. He took the cotton and cleaned the wound.


"Your boss will get upset, please leave." Said zoya.

Anwar smiled and patted on her head. She was indeed impeccant angel.

"I will..Dont worry. How old are you?" He asked.


"M 17..will be 18 next month." Zoya smiled at him.


"Oh-my-my.. you are too young to work beta..Why did you apply for khan enterprises.."


Anwer asked. He wanted to make zoya comfortable and divert her mind from today's mishap. The poor girl was too terrified. And surprisingly, it did work as he saw zoya relaxing her self.


"Act. My brother...mmm...well..act. I wanted to work.." She lied. Why to bring personal life here..she thought. And it wasn't a complete lie though. She did want to work.!
"Is it ok..?"
She nodded. "you hit your head hard baby. You were out of senses for two days" Anwar told her as he finally bandaged her head.



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Eshita

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Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Wat happn to asad...y he alwys hurt zoya...

Fling so sad fr hr..

Plz update soon...
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Asad 😡

My poor zoya 😭

Anwar is a nice man 😊

God knows what happen to him tht he slapped her 😲

Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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poor Zoya😭 i want to slap asad😡
very well written.
Loved the update
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Eshita,
Just wanted to drop in a Hello. I emailed you something.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whoa
it was great
asad hit her that was quite bad but anyway according to the character it is justified
poor zoya
suffering for no fault of hers
its getting more and more interesting
do continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi once again awesome part 😃

Asad slapped her 😡

Poor Zoya Asad is very rude but i like him 😳

This part was just amazing 👏

Continue soon please 🤗

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