Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14* - Page 60

This story has so much layer! So much emotions dude! 😭 My heart went out for my poor baby. You described it so beautifully! I could actually feel everything.
I loved how zoya is falling for him, yet not wanting to fall for him for her bhaijaan's sake!

One thing I would like to say is your story has a touch of reality! I don't know why, and I don't know what other's feel about it, but I feel that it has essence of reality. I love it.

I m sure, asad too has fallen too deeply for her because, why would he show his helplessness to her when he had never done this before! But again, he wont accept it! Its asad we are talking about!!!! 😆 Also, zoya is 7 years younger to him! Wo bhi ek problem dikhta hai usko! Idiot jackass! 😡

All in all, a very heart touching and extremely well written part. And not forget, the song. What selection yaar! Amazing song and apt stuaion. I could actually see zoya cradling asad! 😳

Love
Ahaana

Oh Eshi its so touching and innocent update.

lovely part Ishita👏

Sorry 4 not commenting till now .but must say It is 1of the best off m reading .Just luv the mysterious khan but wud luv him to b emotional in front o Zoyee...and. Plz Continue with same twists just luv its suspense

asad is so broken but now he has zoya with him
thks 4 pm
cont soon

oh sooo emotional & touching it was .the way he asked her not to leave show without saying that he need her .hope that as ad open up his feelings in front o her. Luv this story
Plzzz
Updaaattteee
Sooonnniiissshhh

very emotional update...

zoya very caring person...

she emotional attach to asad...

Love the way you wrote about asad painful
moment in life...👏

So finally we are going to see the real face of asad & more importantly zoya will understand him .