Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14*

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

chapter 10 !

i'm sorry ! i just can't hit like !! something's wrong with my like button !

but i just love your updates ! plz don't think i didn't like it !

i'm glad that this fic isn't some lovey dovey romance but a deep dark tale with intense romance ! that's what makes this unique and alluring for me !
so keep up the great job !

wow !! that update was something !!

asad's pain , his agony, his loneliness everything is so beautifully portrayed !!

really elegantly written !👏
it was stupefying !!

thanks for the astounding chapter :)
do continue when you are free !

love
-kiki

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mooumi

@mooumi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR ...LOVD IT..CONTINUE SOON😃

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

such a heartbreaking update
to see asad in all this pain he just want to
numb himself with alcohol he doesnt want to feel
hurt anymore he is so broken so devastated
but zoya is their and she see it she see through him
the mask he puts up of this anger is not anger but pain
she took care of him again and he asked her to stay with him
doesnt want to be alone
she kissed him on the forehead to soothe him and sang him asleep
beautifully written
continue soon

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Poor asad :(
Beautifully written. Loved it
continue soon :)

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Emotional but Superb update Eshita.. Loved reading it.. Beautifully written.. Feeling sad for Asad..He is too much hurt.. AsYa scene was AMAZING.. Loved the way Zoya treated his wound.. Hope that soon they both confess their feelings to each-other.. Continue soon.. Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

So poignant!

I read Chapter 9 part 2 and Chapter 10 together.

Such beautiful words. The manner in which you described the pain of Dilshad, Asad; the constellation and sky; the broken man vs the strong facade he puts up. And Zoya's caring nature.

I can see why this was your favourite part to write. Simply beautiful!

You write so very well.

Update! Can't wait for more.

Oh and love the song choice.

Mwahhh!!

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Scarlet

@buttercups2020

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

DEARIES!!!! OMG I CANT TELL HOW MUCH HAPPY I AM!!! I DID AMAZINGLY WELL IN MY ENTRANCE AND HAVE SCORED 312, WHICH I SHOULD TELL YOU IS EXTREMELY WELL!!! 😆 😆 😆 THANK YOU EVERY 1 WHO WISHED ME LUCK AND .. OH YES IIT IS ON THE WAY!! M NOT BOASTING GUYS! ITS IIT, SO ITNA TO BANTA HAI NA.!! 😉

ANYWAYS PEOPLE! I HAVE ASKED FOR ATLEAST 80 LIKES AND WE ARE STILL AT 64.
COMMON! 😡 😡 😡

AND HEy, I KNOW 20 PAGE COMMENTS IS ABSURED! BUT ATLEAST MAKE IT 15 NO!! 😆 😆

MY UPDATE IS READY! AND I'LL POST IT THE MOMENT YOU ALL WILL CLICK 'I AGREE ALL TERMS AND CONDINTIONS' 😆 😆 😆

BE QUICK!!

REGARDING MY T.S AND OTHER TWO FFs, I'LL FIRST UPDATE THE DARK SHADOWS, THEN AN OFFER YOU JUST CANT REFUSE, THEN T.S AND THEN DECEITFUL VOWES!

Love
Eshita

Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Superb dear as always...

Loved it a lott

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melissa

@melissa05

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Heyy...
Dat update wz awesome!!
I totally felt bad for Asad...
All that pain!! 😔
It wz beautifully written!!
Love it to d max...
Plz plz update soon!!! 😃
Oh, n love hw Asad slept wen Zoya comforted him!!
Awww... I love love love it!!
Continue soon!!! 😃