Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14*

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asyanadasya

@asyanadasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

omg!!!!!! tat ewas jst awesome i read al parts in a go.. wat a story yr... sriously d bst chemistry an situations i jst luved it hats ooff to u...⭐️

as i'm a silent reader i wont be able 2 wr8 much comments bt i'll be always thr to read ur story

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Scarlet

@buttercups2020

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Hello peep! M so so overwhelmed! I swear I just love your comments. and the likes! Its really a good feeling when you know you have readers to read your efforts. And trust me, this is what encouraging me the most to update daily! But alas! These exams I tell you! 😡
Anyways, please don't think that I don't read your comments. I really do. But at the moment m unable to give replies. But I promise I will.. Soon!

Here's a teaser for the next part. I hope you like it!

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"ASAD!"

He stumbled slightly before turning round to face her. A frown etched into his brow as he scanned for the person calling his name. His eyes locked on her. One of the guys took his distraction as an opportunity to hit asad hard in the face. Her hand flew up to my mouth in shock. Why was he fighting again? Her thoughts jumbled as she ran across the road to the group. Asad stood up against the wall as he took another fist to his face. Fear coursed through her as she recognized the guy beating Asad. She gasped as she saw the eyes behind the mask.

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The man nodded at her and She didn't really have time to process what She was doing. Her right hand rose and smacked him hard across his cheek. The force caused his head to turn. The man angrily stared at her, and his vision then diverted behind her towards asad.

"You need a girl to protect you." the man taunted.

They both knew this would provoke him. Asad shoved himself off the wall, stumbling forward to try and get to the man.

"For god's sake, Asad. Just stop."

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Stay tuned!

Love
eshita

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melissa

@melissa05

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Heyyy, jus read it!!
It is awesome!!! I totally love it...
Asad is soo dark.. Oohhh...
N Zoya is soo adorable.
I love every bit of it!!
So want 2 no who is dat person dat danced with Zoya!!
Plz continue sooon!!
Pretty plz...
Love it to the max!! 😃

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

update
update plz plz dieing to read

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Scarlet

@buttercups2020

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

A MOMENT (part 1).

Soon the song got faded in the darkness of the hall. Asad slung a strong arm around zoya's waist, pulling her closer to his warm body. He smelt divine. Time froze as the two eyes met. Zoya stared deeply in those eyes and wondered the depths of secrets they shielded. The deeper she looked, the more she realized the absence wolfish gleam..there was no fiendish glare, but a man, such a man as she have never known. Those two dark eyes were too pure, too honest to disguise the innocent soul shinning through them.

Heartbeats rose and breathings became tough, as the closeness made them feel something they never felt. None tried to break the eye lock' neither did they move apart. Mingling in the new aroma, they felt fresh. Like a new birth. Forgetting the worries and cruelties of the world, asad zoya geared up for diving in the pool of love. Asad in no way was willing to leave her. Her presence filled him with a sense of completeness. Not being able to understand his own feelings, he gave up and let the moment take him wherever it wanted.

Gently he explored her face with his fingers as a blind man might, as if he had never seen it before and might never again.

"What are you doing to me" he breathed with a trace of his old bitterness.

She'd wanted to touch and kiss and hold him from the day she'd met him. She'd wanted him to burn for her, just as she'd wanted him to set her ablaze. The moment right now was the replica of her dreams that she had seen since a week now. His voice did magic to her ears and heart and lungs. Her shorten breaths were the clear evidence of the affect that asad had on her. She held his shoulder tighter as she inhaled his presence so close to hers. Asad twirled and lifted her effortlessly as she gave in herself, completely to him.

Her body swayed in air like a dry weed and He caught her right before she hit the ground . They held each other, breathing deeply for what could have been for hours. Her sapphire-blue eyes twinkled in the moonlight as she leaned in for a kiss.

Desire ignited the world around them as they became lost in the sea of emotions. Asad had always been immune to such emotions and in that moment, neither of them moved. Neither of them breathed. They just . . . existed together and The tension melted away. Not wanting to analyze anything , the duo leaned in for a commitment that was yet to be spoken.

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Feeling zoya inches away, made him jerk her. He pushed her as harshly as he could making her stumble few steps back. ..

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I wont say its a filler as it was a must part for the duo. However I apology for the length. I promise to put up a lengthier in next 24 hours.!!!

Press like and leave your views PLEASH!!
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Love
eshita

Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago