ASYA FF : ISHAQZAADE - Discontinued (NOTE-PG34)

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Ramlath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow...very nice update...
I just loved it...
Thnx fr pm...
Pls pls update soon...

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The-Diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
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Yipeee I am first again...🥳
It was a awesome update...😉
I really liked the way Zoya was bugged by Asad seeing him first time...😳
She was totally flattened by seeing the Greek God in front of her...😳
Asad was also lost by seeing her ...but she was wearing miniskirt...😲
U left at cliffy... Why ??😲😡
Update soon and thanks for pm...😊

Hey, first again?!!😛 Thanks for reading

Well.. I had to leave coz of some other work .. I'll try to update soon with some Asyalicious scenes 😳

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The-Diva

@The-Diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Wow...very nice update...
I just loved it...
Thnx fr pm...
Pls pls update soon...

Ur welcome!! Keep reading, I'll try to update today ..

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey just lvd it
update soon nd pls p.m me

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Asadluvszoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Instant liking. Good start. Would love to see how story develops.

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The-Diva

@The-Diva

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hey Guys,

Thanks for liking the story. And to silent readers -- Please comment (Constructive criticism is always welcome). I still am updating the story despite my exams being SO close :)

Part 3

Asad stares at Zoya's miniskirt and feels furious. He pushes her hand away.

Asad : Miss Farooqui , kaise behuda kapde pehne hai apne?

Zoya (confused) : Kyon? In Kapdo mein problem kya hai? Office me toh usually log aise hi kapde pehente hai naa?!

Asad ( He stand up and brings his face close to Zoyas slowly one word at a time) : MERE OFFICE MEIN NAHI!!!

Zoya feels at a loss of words

Zoya : M--Mr Khan, main s-samhji nahi!

Asad : Kya apko apke ammi - abbu ne apko ye hi sikhaya- Aise chote chote kapde pehen kar bahar jaana?

Zoya feels tears of anger sprout in her eyes and says clearly and confidently

Zoya: Mr Khan, Ye mere kapde hai , Character nahi... Aur waise bhi mere Ammi aur Abbu mar chuke hai..

Asad : Dekhiye, ap roiye mat, ye...

Before Asad completes his sentence, Zoya walks out leaving behind a confused and irritated Asad

Asad(thinking): Ye ladki apne aap ko samajhti kya hai, Aaj tak Asad Ahmed Khan ke baat ko kaat kar koi nahi gaya hai, aur iss ki yeh himmat..

Lekin mujhe is se aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi - usse toh yahan ke rules bhi nahi pata the -- pata nahi us waqt mai us ki taraf protective kyon feel kar raha tha?!

Ayaan walks in

Ayaan : Bhaijaan, mujhe yahan se chillane ki awaaz aa rahi thi aur ab maine Zoya ko yahan se rote hue jaate dekha , Kya huwa? Aap ise bhi fire karna chahte hai..?

Asad(blurts) :NAHI!! (He looks at Ayaan's amused expression and says gruffly) Mera matlab hai-- uski koi zaroorat nahi hogi.

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At the Khan house

Zoya sits on the table angrily stuffing pizza in to her mouth : Pata nahi ye Mr Khan apne aap ko samajhte kya hai?! Bas ameer hone se aur good looks hone se kya wo mujhe kuch bhi keh sakte hai? Agar mujhe is job ki itni zaroorat nahi hoti naa, toh mai unka job unke muh pe maar ke aati!!!

Najma giggles : Baaji, aap bhi naa! Woh dikhne me ache the kya?

Zoya: Sach me Najma, dikh ne me to Salman Khan se kam nahi the-- Unhe dekhte hi mere toh hosh hi udd gaye!!

Acha mai ab sone jaa rahi ho, apke bhaijaan aaye nahi?

Najma: Abhi toh sirf 9 baje, woh to 10 baje aate hai

Zoya: Shayad aaj bhi nahi mil sakti, chodo kal dekhungi.

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At night, Zoya wakes up feeling thirsty. She finds all the lights off.She goes to the kitchen and drinks water. On the way to her room, she sees the lights on in a room

Zoya: Shayad Najma abhi tak soyi nahi hai.. Chal ke dekti hoon

In the room, Asad takes off his office shirt to change into his casual clothes when the door opens wide...

Zoya : AAP????

Asad: AAP YAHAN KYA...??

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okay guys, done!!! Comments😳 Will update longer after exams...Byeee

Edited by fashionprincess - 11 years ago

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Anitha

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow wat a start buddy..
Really really awesome..
I just read three parts in one go yaar 👍🏼👍🏼
great start...👏
Excited to see asya in office...😳
cliffy end??😭
looking forward to see their reaction in khan mansion
Asya first meet was awesome.😳 mesmerized each other.
Thanks for the pm buddy..🤗
I just loved it...❤️

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Anitha

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Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hayee im first🥳

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome update..
Loved it
u left at cliffy... Huh?
Update soon and pm me...
Best of luck for ur exam though it was short but
considering ur exam its ok...
Thanks for the pm..