ASYA FF : ISHAQZAADE - Discontinued (NOTE-PG34)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi QHians!!
I'm Humaira
I have decided to try another attempt at writing an FF after a failed first attempt 😕!!
I got this idea out of the blue and I decided to pen it down (or 'type' in this case 😆)
I hope you like it!!! Healthy criticism is welcome.. Please comment so I know my efforts arent going waste 😛
PART 1 - BELOW
PART 2 - PAGE 2
PART 3 - PAGE 3
PART 4 - PAGE 6
PART 5 - PAGE 10
PART 6 - PAGE 18
PART 7 - PAGE 23
PART 8 - PAGE 28
Ishaqzaade
All characters same as in show.. Ill let you know if I make any change!
PART 1
Location : Airport
Aapi : Zoya, hume aap ko yahan Bhopal me chod kar jana accha nahi lag raha, akhir 2 din hi toh huwe hai tumhare yahan.. Agar apke Jiju ka kaam beech mai nahi aata toh mai yahan ruk jaati .. Aap apna khayal rakh loge naa?
Zoya : Allah miyan, kitni baar batau mai Aapi , mai apna khayal rakh sakhti hoon..
Aapi : Tumne Dilshad Bi ka address likh liya na?
Zoya : Ji , mere purse mai hai.. Aaj pehli baar unse milne wali hoon, pata nahi mujhe dekh kar unhe kaisa lagega?!
Aapi : Arre Zoya, mai Dilshad bi ko jaanti hoon.. Bohut achhe mizaj ki hai, tumhara khoob khayal rakhenge. Aur aap ke company ke liye unki beti Najma bhi toh hai!
Jiju : Zeenath, jaldi karo, flight ke liye deri ho rahi hai.. ( He comes over and gives Zoya a hug) Bye Zoya, roz message karte rehna..
Zoya : Zaroor jiju.. Bye aapi, mera bilkul bhi fikar nahi karna( They hug with tears in their eyes)

Location : Khan house
Tring!!
Najma runs to open the door and screams: AMMI!! Woh aa gayi!
She opens the door to see Zoya nervously standing near the door wearing a casual white shirt and jeans.She shakes hands with her
Zoya : Hi , tum Najma ho na?
Najma : Ji Zoya! Aap bohat khoobsurat hai ! Andar aayi na
Zoya: Thanks tamatar.. maine suna ki tumhara naam sabne tamatar rakha hai ??
Najma (laughs) : Ji mujhe bhaijaan tamatar bulate hai, Ye dekho ammi aa gayi.
Dilshaad enters: Assalamu alaikum Zoya! Kaisi ho? Bohut suna hai tumhare baare me!
Zoya and dilshaad hug.
Zoya : Mai thik ho phupi..
Dilshaad: Arre, khadi kyon ho? Baitho na, Najma ek glass paani lau Zoya ke liye.. Waise Zoya , tum Bhopal me kyu ruki ho?
Zoya: Wo phupi mai Bhopal mai settle hona chahti hoon. Mai ne to apne liye job application tak tayyar kar liye, kal hi mera interview hai
Dilshad : Ye toh bohut acchi baat hai lekin tumhe uss se pehle mai tumhara kamra bata ti hoon.
She leads Zoya to a cosy and spacious bedroom
Ye raha tumhara room. Change karke dinner pe aao.
Zoya : Thanks a lot phupi, lekin mai dinner nahi karungi , mai ne dinner aapi aur jiju ke saath karli. Ab toh mai seedha so jaane wali ho.. Waise Phupi, ap ke bas sirf 1 beti hai kya?Mujhe yaad nahi Aapi ne kya kaha tha!!
Dilshad: Nahi, mere paas ek beta bhi hai.. Wo office mai hai iss waqt. Uska naam A...
The phone rings loudly
Oh! Chand Bi ka phone hoga..Excuse me Zoya!
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Next update : Zoya goes for interview to Khan industry office in a short dress!!! Asad and Zoya first meeting!

COMMENT PLEASE😳
NOTE: PLEASE SEND BUDDY REQUEST FOR PMs.
Thanks for your time
P.S Please read Part 2 before judging the story.




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The-Diva thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLEASE LET ME KNOW-- SHOULD I CONTINUE????
ILL LET YOU DECIDE
HUMI
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I think its fabulous...
U sholud continue...
I totally loved it n now waiting for asad and zoya meeting...
Zoya in short dress... HaHa😈 she is gonna land in big trouble...😆😈
Do continue soon and pm me...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

I think its fabulous...

U sholud continue...
I totally loved it n now waiting for asad and zoya meeting...
Zoya in short dress... HaHa😈 she is gonna land in big trouble...😆😈
Do continue soon and pm me...😉

Thankyou so much // 😃 Good to see someone awake at this hour 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is jst superb!
Love every bit of it...
Pls continue n pls do pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariam1368

Wow this is jst superb!
Love every bit of it...
Pls continue n pls do pm me.

Thank you.. Glad you liked it !!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fashionprincess

Thankyou so much // 😃 Good to see someone awake at this hour 😆


Yaa i am awaken at this time...😆 but ur also awken at this time...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting
continue soon and do pm me😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Zoya puts on a beige top and a mini skirt for her interview with nude makeup.
Zoya(thinking) : I hope mujhe yeh PA ka job mil jaaye.. position bhi achi hai aur bohut reputed company lagti hai is advertisement se..
She goes downstairs
Najma : Wow Zoya !! Aap itni achhi lag rahi hai miniskirt me! Mujhe bhi achha lagta hai par kya karu Bhaijaan kabhi nahi pehen ne denge ..
Zoya: Kyu?
Najma : Arre wo bohut strict hai in sab cheezon me.. miniskirt toh kya woh to mujhe jeans ta nahi pehen ne dete
Zoya : Achha, Phir toh mujhe unse milna hi padega, do chaar batein suna deti hoon..
Najma(giggles) : Uski zaroorat nahi hai.. Waise bhi wo office ke liye nikal chuke .. Wo bohut particular hai apne timetable ke.
Zoya: Thik hai, unse shaam me milungi, Phupi kahan hai? Unhe bye kehna hai
Najma: Wo Apne kamre me araam kar rahi hai kyon ki unka sar dard hai
Zoya: OK, toh mai nikalti hoon, phupi ko bye kehna
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Zoya gets down from the car in front of the Khan industries building
Zoya(thinking) : Wow... Bohut posh building hai
Suddenly she notices lot of people staring at her
Zoya: Kitne weird log hai.. aise kyon ghoor rahe hai?!
She enters the office and the receptionist directs her into a waiting room . Zoya looks around admiringly at the tastefully decorated interiors. She sits next to 2 ladies waiting for their turn..The ladies also stare at her
Zoya: Allah miyan! What's wrong with these people ? Mai koi joker hoon kya jo mujhe stare kare jaa rahe hai
In 15 minutes
Announcer : Miss Zoya, please come in..
Zoya gets up and walks up to the door before knocking politely
'come in'
She goes in to see a young man with wavy hair smiling sweetly. He gets up and shakes her hand .
Ayaan : Hi, Im Ayaan. And I persume you're Zoya?(Zoya nods) Good. Please take a seat.
Zoya sits and finishes her interview with Ayaan which turns out great
Ayaan : It was good meeting you, I feel you should join work today itself..
Zoya : Really?!!!! OMG.. Im really surprised you took such a fast decision
Ayaan : I had to.. But let me remind you, You'll be working for Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He likes only perfect work and he fired his previous PA for clumsiness.
Zoya: Its ok, Im sure I can handle him.. When can I meet him?
Ayaan : He is free now , so I guess you should meet him right now in his office upstairs. He is really busy later
Zoya : Ok.. See you Ayaan
Ayaan: Here, take this file and get it signed- its your job contract. And... Be careful of your outfits from now
Zoya shrugs and gives a confused look but since Ayaan receives a call, she asks no more
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Zoya knocks the door to Asad ahmed khan's cabin and on getting the permission walks in..
On entering, she feels her breath getting sucked away.. She sees an extremely handsome man with silky hair and sitting on a large plush black chair sipping coffee and going through a file.
Zoya: H--hi, I--im Zoya farooqui
He doesn't even look up to her as he speaks

Asad: I just got a call from Ayaan miss farooqui.. He says you're really confident and seem efficient. I hope you will live up to that.
Zoya(fumbles): I..Wi..will try m..my best mr khan
Asad: Keep your contract papers on the desk and leave. Be here tomorrow morning at sharp 8:00..
Zoya walks up to the Greek god at the desk to keep the papers even as she thinks: Allah miyan, why is he so handsome.. I can't work if this man is around me.. But why isn't he looking at me.. So mean..And why the hell am I stuttering like an idiot
As she keep the papers,she accidentally pushes his coffee mug on to him lost in her
Asad gets up: WHAT THE... what are you doing , you.. He looks at her and feels a loss of words. He feels like he is seeing the most gorgeous lady in his whole life blushing and uttering sorries even as she rubbed his coat with a wad of tissues- her long black hair, her innocent brown eyes , a cute nose , luscious lips and her.. WHAT?!!MINISKIRT?! He pushes her hand away
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SORRY for stopping here. Have to go.. PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND VIEWS..

Edited by fashionprincess - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yipeee I am first again...🥳
It was a awesome update...😉
I really liked the way Zoya was bugged by Asad seeing him first time...😳
She was totally flattened by seeing the Greek God in front of her...😳
Asad was also lost by seeing her ...but she was wearing miniskirt...😲
U left at cliffy... Why ??😲😡
Update soon and thanks for pm...😊
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago

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