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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome i just loved it 🤗

Continue soon please 😃

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nautanki_anu

@nautanki_anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wowieee!!!

Rivs darling, this is beauuutiful!!! I could imagine each and every scene. The writing is simple and the flow is very smooth. There are no lengthy descriptions and explanations and that's what I really loved.

A thunderous applause from my side as a reader 👏 👏 👏

And a warm hug too as a friend. 🤗

Can't wait for more *rubs palms* 😆

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indu333

@indu333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

lovely update...

asad and zoya are amazing as always...

cont sooon...

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: manognasai
Awesome...👏Loved it a lot!Its really cute and refreshing start...I never celebrated Christmas but I love it a lot...Love the way u wrote Christmas celebrations and gifts giving!AsYa are attracted to each other...❤️Update soon😊

thanks dear. I love Christmas and I miss it here. It's a lot like Diwali and Eid where the religious significance is only for the believers. But there are those who truly enjoy the gift of giving and do a lot of good during this time.

Yes they are attracted...the next one will be very cheezy...be prepared.😆

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ani-asya
Great start di..👏
Different concept 👍🏼👍🏼
looking forward to see more..
I loved it..[:]

Thanks Ani. How are you?

Next part will be up around Thursday I think😛

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Another masterstroke...
You were missing in action...
Awesome piece of penning...
Loved the Christmas atmosphere...
Yep it is about giving and taking...
Zoya mesmerised by his eyes and voice..
Asad happy that danny is just a friend..
She did not miss the smile...
But what did he get her for for Christmas..
Waiting for the pm...

Thanks Rajni. I was missing because I had lost interest in AsYa TBH. I was sticking with the show coz I was curious but the allure to AsYa was dead around ZoYaan. But now it is slowly back and I am enjoying to write about them.

I will try to post pic of the Christmas present if I can find the right thing...

Rivs

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nautanki_anu
Wowieee!!!

Rivs darling, this is beauuutiful!!! I could imagine each and every scene. The writing is simple and the flow is very smooth. There are no lengthy descriptions and explanations and that's what I really loved.

A thunderous applause from my side as a reader 👏 👏 👏

And a warm hug too as a friend. 🤗

Can't wait for more *rubs palms* 😆

Thanks Anu for reading. I know u don't read fan fiction much, but your reading this means a lot to me.🤗

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the applause and a hug. The next part will be cheesy, so yes you have been warned.

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Thanks Ani. How are you?
Next part will be up around Thursday I think😛

Me superb di.. Hope u are fine..
u think Thursday??
Looking forward to the next part...

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: pinks2911
That was amazing..
Asad and Zoya have started falling in love..
Waiting for your next part..
Please do continue soon.. Can't wait..
Can you drop me a pm maybe when yu update??
Looking forward to it..

They are starting to fall in love but I wont be able to get in too much detail since this a two shot only and was originally conceived as a one shot.

Thanks for the comments.