The Mark of Innocence: #2 Note Page 123 - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
This was sad..
Saima you made me cry..!!😭😭
Tanveer and Sofia deserved it..👍🏼
And what is wrong with Asad?? Why is he avoiding Zoya..?He might have realised his feelings but that doesn't mean he avoids her😔
He fought for Zoya and then just left..!😒
I felt so bad for Zoya when she confronted him.. She waited for him but..💔
They didn't talk..I can't believe this went on for months..🥺
Please make everything right..😳
Thanks for the pm but I am sad..🤔😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tanveer and Sofia expelled! 🥳 but Tanveer again attacked and this our Sher didnt stay calm!! 👏
Asad quit dancing without even telling her after what he said that he likes dancing!! 😲 but from his POV its understandable, after he loves Zoya without knowing that she's now Zoe
Dont worry the speed is ok for me 😛
So it has been months they didnt talk?! 😲
Eagerly looking forward for next!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I love this part for some odd reason.

Thank you, high time you separate them. Now they'll realise they miss each other and then they'll fight and and and and...??????

Please take your time with this...lay out all that is needed. It's okay. Well it won't be okay with your other fans (hehe) but you know how much I love build ups!!

When is Kamli coming. Wait. Don't tell me. Take your time. It has to be super special and BANG! Hee.



Lol thank you Einstein Jnr

It's a little way off yet but definitely in there lol...oh and I put Pooh bear in it too 😆

I hope it is ok with everyone...I did say that I was having trouble writing this one...maybe I should take a break from it lol
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Tanveer and Sofia expelled! 🥳 but Tanveer again attacked and this our Sher didnt stay calm!! 👏
Asad quit dancing without even telling her after what he said that he likes dancing!! 😲 but from his POV its understandable, after he loves Zoya without knowing that she's now Zoe
Dont worry the speed is ok for me 😛
So it has been months they didnt talk?! 😲
Eagerly looking forward for next!! 😃


Thank you

I think they did but it was minimal talk...with a lot of tension...so nothing really was normal between any of them

He may have quit now because of Zoe but just maybe he will start up again because of Zoya 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

yipee i m first
awesome di
tanveer and sophia out of col [:D/]
farhaan s a jerk 😡
felt soo sorry for zoya 😭
they didnt talk for months 😭
superb update
cont soon with asya filled update 😉


Thank you so much my darling 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aksasya

It was an awesome update...I loved it...but still impatient abt hw asya will find themselves...Eagerly waiting for next update...And thank u so much for the pm and thank u for not keeping us wait for long...



Aaah thank you so much my dearest, I really appreciate it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This tanveer, sofia and this farhaan these three muskeetersare really annoying😡

i just want o kill three of them..😡🤬

Both of them got attached together and now hell break loose by that three
filthy ppl...🤢

Now i am waiting to see how things work out... and i know why leo changed his
decision to leave dance class cos of that childhood promise...😔
but he dosent that lost childhood friend is none other than zoya...😭

Now it has strected to months... oh my god how r their gonna solve their problems...
It was a really a power packed update..

that farhaan asad part was really a brilliantly written i had goosebumps while reading
it... and was eager to know that when asad will use his hands.. and tere he uses his hands on him...👏
Now i think that their will miss each other and then their will make it up for that...
Take ur time di... as well as we r getting these beautiful updates by u...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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THEY ARE SOO MESSED UP AND FIGHTING THEIR FEELINGS MANNN!!!!😭
AND ITS MONTHS NOW !!!!!!😭
FARHANNN!!!!!!!!!!
WHATS HIS PROBLEM EVEN IF THEY LOVE EACH OTHER 😡
WHAT IS ANYONE'S PROB.😡
TANVEER GOT THROWN OUT!!!!👏

ASAD LEFT DANCE TOO 😭 PROBABLY TO BE AWAY FRM ZOYA 😭



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

This tanveer, sofia and this farhaan these three muskeetersare really annoying😡


i just want o kill three of them..😡🤬

Both of them got attached together and now hell break loose by that three
filthy ppl...🤢

Now i am waiting to see how things work out... and i know why leo changed his
decision to leave dance class cos of that childhood promise...😔
but he dosent that lost childhood friend is none other than zoya...😭

Now it has strected to months... oh my god how r their gonna solve their problems...
It was a really a power packed update..

that farhaan asad part was really a brilliantly written i had goosebumps while reading
it... and was eager to know that when asad will use his hands.. and tere he uses his hands on him...👏
Now i think that their will miss each other and then their will make it up for that...
Take ur time di... as well as we r getting these beautiful updates by u...👏



Thank you so so much for your feedback and for liking it

One more chapter before they find out...next chapter will build up to it

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Thank you

I think they did but it was minimal talk...with a lot of tension...so nothing really was normal between any of them

He may have quit now because of Zoe but just maybe he will start up again because of Zoya😉



Wow if this happens i will be even more in love with this story that i'm already r!!

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