AsYa TS 'Usse Ab Laut Ana Chahiye Tha' *Completed*

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Anu

@sweety003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Very emotional

You made me cry :(

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tv05

@tv05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

awesome update...

luvd it...

thnks fr pm...

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

I honestly thought Asad would bring Zoya out of her coma.. But you had other plans.. *sob*...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

very beautifully written...!!!!!!!!!!!

Too good...!!

But so sad and depressing...

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

That was a beautifully written part Emaani. Every poetry you used was so meaningful and so well related to the scenarios, they all made me cry, I could feel the pain Zoya felt.

Initially I thought it was another misunderstanding vali story and all will be OK in the end. But as Asad started reading her diary, I realized, something was not right.

Gosh! You've made me sad and made me cry. And the master stroke was Asad's poetry in the end.

Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Hey it's a really beautiful piece of work... the end brought tears into my eyes...their love shouldn't have ended so tragically but then it was the tragedy which made it so beautiful as well.😊

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Emaaan!!! 😭 I am literally cryinggg!! You don't really know how good you are at writing!! This was so freakin' perfecttt!

CHAPTER 1 :

ughhh first pls go and kill Farhan.. such a.. ugh!! 😡 at first i thought he's just a friend but i never knew his character would turn the other way round! coming to that Nikkah scene, I loved the way you penned down Zoya's nervous feelings and all 😳 and that part when Asad said 'Qubool... nahi hai' also made me cry! not this badly but yeah it did make me cryy 😭 aww! that diary part was so heart touching! actually soul stirring! too well written, Emaan 👍🏼 i really loved the way you wrote it all... actually i've kept a few sentences in my mind because the sentences were so good they can help me when i'm writing stories 😛 The shayari... WOW! i thought tum ne khud likhi hai 😛 The lines you chose are getting in with every situation !! 👏 literally amazingg!! 👍🏼 good search dude 😉

CHAPTER 2 :

Waah dude! Kitna late update kiya hai tumne chapter 2 😛 Late lateef 😆 I'm so happy !! Asad serioulsy gave that bast*** what he deserved! really good! acha kiya Asad ney! He really needed all this 😛 OMGG! This part literally made me cry my eyes out!! Thank you Emaan for writing such a nice TS! I really love sad endings, as you know! And this was brilliantly written! and i mean it 😳 You need to give me writing classes through PMs, okay ? 😛 You HAVE to teach me all this 😉 I never knew she would die.. i thought sirf coma mein jayegi 😭 well the way you penned down Asad's meotions this time was so awesome! i literally couldn't resist my tears form falling ! 😭 WOOOW!! Emaan sach mein you've a natural talent of writing! keep writing sad endings ! 😛 i love youu so much for suggesting me this one 😳 Ab next time be ready for writing classes... ! 😉 The shayari you chose was so tear jerking 😭 It made me feel all the pain! 😭

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Okay bye. Now i've to go 😊 And i really mean all what i wrote above 😳 i didn't say it just for making you happy or anything! 😃