AsYa TS 'Usse Ab Laut Ana Chahiye Tha' *Completed* - Page 16

Awesome + emotional update...👏

Just love it...😊

heart touching story
i thought asad's touch will bring her back
but she died..😭
i loved those poems written by zoya
such a tragic end for beautiful love story
may they live together happily in heaven

Originally posted by: sasir

literally cried

amazing.

but what was zoya's fault that she should be dead

if anyone needed punishment was farhan.

That was beautifully written :)

it was so beautiful. i have cried after reading ur 2 part

its very sad ending... i dont know what to say...

Really emotional!😭

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

mine

well ab tak mjhe maafi mil gaye hoge 😡 😳 jee mill gayi hai. 😛
😊
now update
it was emotional ywr u made me cry Awww sorry for that. 😳
it happens very less jab mai update psrh kar roh parte hn or tmhare uupdate ne mjhe bht rolaysa 😭 You know it also makes me glad :) because I succeeded in conveying their pain to you. 😊
my asya but still i was so happy with the ending I too like sad endings. 😃
coz asad deserved it, even agr usse farhan ne mmisunderstood kiya tab bhe usse zoya ka bbelieve karna chahie ths Love is nothing without trust.
otherwise kahan ki mohabbat 😭 Exactly!
farhan 🤢 he disgust md kitne maza se story suna raha tha as if koi movie ki story ho 😡 idiot
asad ne bht zabardast pitae lagae 😆 Hahah 😆
and the end they died 😭
and ur poetry at end was so loving i just tried to learn it Hahah thanks 😃 BTW one of my friend told this poetry to me around 3 years back and I've learned it by heart back then. I still remembered it so thought to use it here. 😳
overall amazing
duperb job 👏
hats off 😊