AsYa TS 'Usse Ab Laut Ana Chahiye Tha' *Completed* - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -KitKit-

wowww Loved it... ❤️

asya ❤️

n ur writing skills.. woww 😊

gr8 job 😳


Originally posted by: KReyAS

😭 make me so emotinal m literally crying. awesome


Originally posted by: Anjinie

it was so sad! beautifully written


Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Awesome superb update...Loved it...It was so emotional & beautifully written..Thanks 4 pm


Thanks A LOT guys 🤗
These comments means a lot for me :')
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Awesome update. Emotional. Thanks for the pm


Originally posted by: sona_naksh

its really a sad one ...thnx for pm


Originally posted by: marcoe

Beautifully written


Originally posted by: masaf57

Awesome update, loved it thanks for the pm


Originally posted by: princess101

So emotional amazingly written though loved it


Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Superb update...Such a emotional update...U made me cry...Asya love is so intense...Loved it


Thanks a lot everyone 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.. Tragic ending.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

loved it

but zoya's death was unbearable
keep doing ur gr8 work



Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Emotional. Amazing update. Thanks for pm so sweet of you


Originally posted by: sammy4u

nice part dear. loved it


Originally posted by: kritz4ever

must say its an emotional update. had tears at the end


Originally posted by: nilusoni

very emotional ending. thanx for pm. do pm me for next work


Originally posted by: ksen

Very nice update loved it thanks for pm


Thanks. Glad you all liked the part. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Issue acha tha finish hi naaa karte


That was heart wrenchinggg


Lol 😆
Maine toh as an OS hi update kiya tha per readers ne hi ek aur part ki demand ki. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Emaani.95



Lol😆
Maine toh as an OS hi update kiya tha per readers ne hi ek aur part ki demand ki.😛



well even i was one of them..
But seriously yaar..
I cried alot..
So so so gud prt...
Rola diya mujhe...


U write so well..
Keep it up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu



well even i was one of them..
But seriously yaar..
I cried alot..
So so so gud prt...
Rola diya mujhe...


U write so well..
Keep it up :)


You cried??? 😲
It's hard to believe for me as you seem like a jolly person to me and I didn't expect you to get emotional while reading a fiction 😳
Well am glad that I succeeded in conveying Zoya's feelings to the reader. 😊
Edited by Emaani.95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh!!! such a heart rendering update it was!!
totally a brilliant piece of writing!!
totally in love with this TS!!
uh are a super talented writer!!
would love to read more from uh!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

good job😊

i wanted happy end though


Thanks 😊
But I wanted it to remain a sad fiction 😳

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