SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

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now part 13
it was so good yaar😃
thank You Dear.😃
so Zoya did fell ill🤢,ye toh hona hi tha😆
yea she did... hona hi tha..😆

Dillu-Naj taking care of her & were so concerned🤗
Dillu and naj are always sweethearts.and their bond with Zoya is something very beautiful so even i want to maintain that throughout.

Asad so badly wanted 2 know about her
even asked 2 Najma about her😛
& little got bit upset when he got 2 know they didn't took Zoya 2 doctor
but didn't had d guts 2 ask his mother about Zoya😒
Yea unknowingly Asad has started to care about Zoya, think of her and slowly he will get more attached to Zoya and he wouldn't realize it initially.

he was all restless 2 know about Zoya❤️,kya kare Dil hai ke manta nahi😆

exactly...dil hai ki manta nahi.. dil always behaves in its own manner.😆
went 2 her house,but returned cuz it was locked💔
then stole her no. from Dillu's phone😳
hehe yea thought it would show how becheni he was about Zoya even though he did not realize it.

Zoya was surprised hearing him call at midnight😲
thank God she was fine😊
Asad apologized 2 Dillu
that was very well written scene👏
thank you... Asad - Dillu bond is like no other.

then he went 2 check on Zoya b4 going 2 office👍🏼
btw Sara is g8 girl,she cares 4 Zoya, I really like her😃
everyone should have a friend like Sara.

Asya have started caring 4 each other but didn't realised, hope we see that soon😎
it will come... but gradually.
thanx 4 PM buddy🤗
& updt nxt part soon😉
welcome Dear... will try to update soon.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You Jas.. such a beautiful sticker... even i love it.. i mean this.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

awww.

loved it.
happy with the progress of their relation.
want to know zoya's story after her mothers death.
plz update soon
thanx for pm

thanks.. glad you loved it... hope the progress is not slow... but a natural progression should be there...thats why i am not rushing with it.

Zoya's story after her mom's death that will come later.. not so soon... sorry about it..
will try to update soon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Yes i am Christian... plus ur story start from xmas...
so i give xmas .. comment.. hehehe


Oh thats nice to know you are a Christian... i guessed it from your comment hehe...
yea i started the story during Christmas, so thought of dedicating it to christams time... plus Zoya in this story i had imagined as a girl who loves all these festivities, children, fairy tales etc so i thought of giving this name... more of that side of Zoya and her bonding with naina will come in the upcoming chapters.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 9...

Is all about tanveer fit in the family...
got everyone attention...

and her over concern ... for asad...

dilshad wants her kids happiness to...
asad deny it coz of his father... hmmm
same past... divorce

in the moment... she thought tanveer would be good for asad...
dilshad suggest it... asad against it...



Yea that chapter was all about how Tanveer came in to their lives and what lead to Asad and her marriage.

Glad you didn't kill me after reading this chap.😆

yea Dilshad has the same past .. rashid left her... but i am still debating whether i should go into that part of their life or leave it... i am more in favour of leaving it as Dilshad is alone all these years and she has adjusted her life without rashid and she is happy with it...

thanks Dear.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kinjal Babaria

Read your fanfic in one go

Simply amazing😊👏👏
Love the storyline😊😊
Glad that asad is warming up to zoya 😳

Oh thats really nice to know... thanks.😃...

yea Asad has started to get drawn to Zoya.

hope you will like the upcoming parts as well.. thanks for the lovely comment.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks.. nice to know that you loved the story.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 10...

So the entry of new baby girl... special moment
for the khan family...

So najma named the baby...

so the ugly past of tanveer... came ...
perfect mask...

poor asad... after so much turmoil... he is so shock...

yea the entry of the new baby was a very special moment and Asad was overwhelmed by it, Dilshad and Najma so happy.

And yea najma named her... actually there were few things which i purposefully incorporated without highlighting the reason behind it... don't know if majority of the readers noticed that or not.

and one of them was the naming of the baby which was something very special for parents and a family... wanted to show that it wasn't Asad and tanveer together who did it but Najma, who is more special in Asad's life.

other thing was if you had noticed, when Asad came to hospital after the baby was born, tanveer was sleeping... so he wasn't able to share with tanveer even that first moment with the baby which was another special moment... instead he shared it with Dilshad and Naj... wrote all that to show that Asad and tanveer couldn't really share anything special as parents as well because it wasn't destined even though they got married.

yea Asad suffered so much.😭

thanks for the comment Dear.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update kaussar ... asad caring for zoya is so sweet and the way he apologized to ammi was lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome update it was!!
read both the chappy at once nd found them to be written really very well!!
it's really good to read such a brilliant story!!!
all i could say is the update was fabulous one!!!
do continue soonish as i am very eager to read next!!!

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