SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 12 .. B

Asad is smiling... looking at zoya... for a moment
zoya and heard... mischief tone from asad...
she cant confirm... it

sweet she is smiling and so is asad... zoya did not see it

now asad feel comfortable.. around zoya
in the spam of 48 hours everything
change in asad life...

yea exactly... in the spam of 48 hours their feelings went through a lot and a lot has changed... but there is a long way for them.😊

Originally posted by: Linsie

Asad cant say much.. coz he think zoya dont know
about his past...

and zoya dont want talk about it more
push more bitter...

Yea Asad thinks Zoya doesn't know anything about his past.. also he is not yet ready to divulge and share his inner most feelings with her..but he will in the coming days and Zoya will then reveal that she already knew about his past.😊

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 13...

Zoya not well... the care and concern his family show.. did not bother him

he to bother about her the all day...

he dont trust but did not hate her...

Asad sit there listening to his mother and is sister

he knows nothing about zoya... and her

attitude...

asad hell worried for zoya and dilshad...
giving him restless...

wow he really suffer... to know her condition...
so finally he did it by calling her...

asad you are changing... this give hope for zoya...

Asad apologies to dilshad and tell her he said sorry to zoya... nice...

and visit zoya was highlight... and talking all
normal tone... wow...

yea Asad's feelings towards Zoya has changed drastically... he hasn't yet realized some of those feelings but at the moment he is acting the way his heart tells him... so he has done somethings which he would normally not do as well... and his heart has started to tell him that Zoya is genuinely nice... he doesn't trust her completely yet still he has started to accept her... and concern and caring is the first step towards more deeper feelings.

so finally you read all the chapters... thanks for all the comments Linsie..😃 i guess i should start writing next chapter soon as a present to you right?😉

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

yayy..asad is changing..

hehe yea... more changes will come soon.😃

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Read all chapters

A very nice story

thanks.. happy to know you liked the story.😃

nice updates
oh zoya he definitely care
he was so restless he couldnt even sleep
he reached till to ur gate at midnight but it as locked
he went and search ur number in his ammi phone and he could
have used his ammi phone to call but he stored ur # in his 😉
aww he reached her door b4 leaving for work and he told hr to call him
if she needs anything ☺️
oh asad ur heart is winning the battle over ur mind when it comes to zoya
oh zoya and ur heart is fluttering too AAK cares
loved her attitude at the hospital parking she is so cute
he couldnt help but smile
he apologizes to her and also his ammi
wonder if he will take advice abut naina
continue soon

Hi when are you updating ?????????????????

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thanks Linsie.. you painstakingly gave a comment to each chapter.. thats so sweet of you...😃
the roadside meeting and Asad offering her a lift was their first step towards each other..
and that led to hospital and yea it was all about them reaching to an understanding unknowingly and learning about each other.. though the gestures on both side were subtle, like Asad offering her his coat, it established a kind of bond and comfort level between them.😊

Thanks... i like ur story.,... now waiting for the update...

Originally posted by: kaussar

Yea Asad thinks Zoya doesn't know anything about his past.. also he is not yet ready to divulge and share his inner most feelings with her..but he will in the coming days and Zoya will then reveal that she already knew about his past.😊

👏 👏 interesting to read that surprise...