SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 11... awesome...

so much emotions...

life test and pain... betrayal...

you write well...

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Linsie

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Chapter 12...A

Zoya is very disturb by the sad story...
she feels it... so much pain this family went through...

Sara very worried for zoya... but she promise she is fine..
friendship...

zoya walking in the rain...

asad knows he needs to move on in life... then holding on to it...

both meet at the road side... now both avoiding each to look...

the near accident ...help them out
of their awkward moment...

zoya take asad to hospital... her concern... hand is bleeding

and the hold hospital scene... is about them
to understand each other...
genuine..
but zoya had a limits ... good

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 12 .. B

Asad is smiling... looking at zoya... for a moment
zoya and heard... mischief tone from asad...
she cant confirm... it

sweet she is smiling and so is asad... zoya did not see it

now asad feel comfortable.. around zoya
in the spam of 48 hours everything
change in asad life...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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love it went asad apologies...

and zoya explain her status ... orphan .. just normal human
been ... and want to feel people around her...

and attach to his family and the reason for coming closer
naina... how much she miss him.as a father...

asad understand what he is doing... so he did not
get angry with zoya

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Asad cant say much.. coz he think zoya dont know
about his past...

and zoya dont want talk about it more
push more bitter...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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at least reach the talking level...

both with out getting angry...

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taznim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 12...A

Zoya is very disturb by the sad story...
she feels it... so much pain this family went through...

Sara very worried for zoya... but she promise she is fine..
friendship...

zoya walking in the rain...

asad knows he needs to move on in life... then holding on to it...

both meet at the road side... now both avoiding each to look...

the near accident ...help them out
of their awkward moment...

zoya take asad to hospital... her concern... hand is bleeding

and the hold hospital scene... is about them
to understand each other...
genuine..
but zoya had a limits ... good

Hi Linsie,
I see that you managed to read up to chapter 12...really happy to know that you are liking all the chapters and the story... have been busy in the afternoon.. will go through all your previous comments and will reply after sometime.😃...