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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Almost there! Yes, bahot mehnat ke baad, I have reached it till part 18. It was a tough ride but I am not the one who gives up very easily! Still some energy left.

Part 18

He proceeded to brush Zoya's wind-tossed hair backwards a little, trying to bring some semblance of order to it, while Zoya reached forward to straighten Asad's collar and coat (How cute, already behaving like a typical hubby-wife. Nice start) 😊😳

thoughts of Zoya's body pressing against his throughout the bicycle ride running through his mind unabashedly (A ride to remember) 😳😉

The mess had become even bigger now (Oh really? Damn, did not see that one coming...)

"That's Mr Vinod Mehta, the vice president," (Aap yeh saala Vinod kaun hain?!) 😕

What's the deal with that? (Detective Farooqui???)

Okay, first let me tell you that usually I read the updates but but but, this time I did not. I wanted to keep it a surprise for myself. Usually, I know whats gonna happen in the next part but not this time. So, you said speculate away... Who the hell is this new character??? My first feeling: he is behaving way too friendly with Mr. Khan. Okay, both might have high positions lekin phir bhi, I do not get a good feeling about him. He does not do any work, but still Mr. Khan gives him that much importance and all... What the deal?

Your genre is rom-com so a negative character/villain would not really fit into the story, but I would not be surprises if this Vinod turns out to be a backstabber...

One more part to go...I am sooo excited because I really want to know whats gonna happen next!

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ohk so i thought i would unres for this part later but then i though "Kal kare so aj kar aj kare to ab pal me parilay ho gayi bahuri karoge kab"...and i don't even want a parilay coming between me and the update and my unresing my comment😳😳

Asad kept his arm securely around Zoya's waist as he guided her off the bicycle at the main door of Dilshaad Constructions. He proceeded to brush Zoya's wind-tossed hair backwards a little, trying to bring some semblance of order to it, while Zoya reached forward to straighten Asad's collar and coat

HayeeeSo they both try fixing each other's look as if its the most natural thing to do😳😳This is so romantic😳😳

Asad ordered the evidently embarrassed security guard, who nodded quickly and then dragged the bicycle away obediently

I feel bad for the poor security guard...soch raha hoga kya dekh liya...kuch bolen to musibat and no bole to log puch puch ke pareshan kar denge😆😆

So Zoya good save ran away from Asad but the damage is done my sweetheart😆😆

He ran his hand through his hair as he walked behind her slowly, thoughts of Zoya's body pressing against his throughout the bicycle ride running through his mind unabashedly.

Hayee mera besharam and batameez Asad i just love you...aakhir thodi batameezi to zaroori hai😉😉

"Zoya, yeh sab kya hai? Now people are going to talk even more," Anu told Zoya disappointedly as she sat her down in front of her desk

Main na kehti thi ki zoya will do something that will just worsen the situation and make people talk even more...see i was so right...akhir main apni bestie ko bahut acche se jaanti hoon😳😳

So a new entry Mr.Vinod...Hmm intriguing😃😃I don't think Asad is very comfortable around him.Also he doesn't even seem competent enough.I think there is a big myestery around his appointment as VP...Also i think he will be a grey kind of character?what say😆😆

I am lookig forward to Vinod and zoya angle...either she will get a little too friendly with him for asad's liking afterall ab zoya ka bhi haq hai asad ko jalane ka ya phir she will land up in some kind of trouble trying to find more about Vinod

😉😉

This is going to be very interesting now..lots of intriguing characters...i can't wait to see the story unfold...

Thanku thanku so much for this interesting chapter green

Love ya❤️❤️

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Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Cannot wait to find out who is this Vinod is loved da update

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Part 17 for me😳 Thank you🤗

This was such an awesome chapter👍🏼 and so funny to😆

Zoya wants to take a bicycle to work😆 Seriously...Her contribution to the environment😆

Asad actually found loopholes in her argument😆

Well my contribution to the environment is...

I'm gone green😆 Thanks to you green ji...You've convinced me👍🏼

Asad and zoya on a bicycle🤣 off to work🤣...So much for avoiding rumours in the offices...There's the fuel...Let the fire burn😆

Oops, I forgot we supposed to be environmentally friendly😆

Wonder what everyone will say now???

Asad and zoya on a bicycle close proximity to each other...Breathing each other's scent...and...Bhopal's city streets...I'm thinking is this better than taking the car to work????

Hell yeah😆 So much more exciting...

Back up for a moment...Was asad actually checking zoya out😲 Chupe Rustam khan😆 Sorry for my hindi...It's not very good

This chapter was just too good👏

Please excuse me while I go read chap 18 now😃 I'll be sure to leave my extremely green comment😃

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Now who is this new character😕 Vinod???? We haven't finished with Vijay yet Vinod arrived😉

Please tell me he is not going to be a kebaab mei haadi to asya's soon to be office romance😕 ======== Asad and zoya's entrance to Dilshaad's constructions was cute...They each straightening each other out...Like a couple would do😉 I'm sure the gossip mill is working overtime...

When asad told the security to park the bicycle where the car should be without any hint of discomfort just cracked me up...That's so unlike the Mr khan I watch on the serial...

I'm so happy that zoya's plan has backfired...

Please tell me we are going to get some action on the way back home...Maybe a few raised eyebrows from Dilshaad ammi😉

Some rain perhaps...with asad and zoya getting soaked...A tipa tipa barsi paani moment😆 You are the author but my imagination has gone on over drive

Great update by the way...👍🏼

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Amazing, as always! Mystery man, ahem! And Zoya adjusting Asad's collar and coat? Hehe

Why do I get a feeling that something is going to happen to the mall model? Please let it not be Zoya's doings! Or maybe it should be? That way we may get her gluing 'em pieces back together, and Asad maybe, just a tad maybe might be a 'lil forgiving?

Eagerly waiting for the next part, I know you don't disappoint. 😉

⭐️FaRz

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

nice update..the bicycle ride was short but was followed was awesome!☺️

now wats with this new guy?? kahin kuch kar nahin liya model ko?? im scared now...please elaborate on this new character next time!😊

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linta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Please update soon ...😭

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Nice Update. Please continue soon as want to know who this new character is and what is his role.

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lasya13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Y I ask.. y??? Y did that security guard interrupt the most awesome moment...
ab yeh naya character koun hai??
r u introducing a negative character in this to compensate tanveer???
Nywaz... loved the update..

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