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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

#5 First Day of School

wow...AsYa's kids gng to school...and Zoya still unsure abt it...
I loved the way Asad & Azim stood my the ladies...Perfect Husband & Perfect Brother...😉

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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

#6 Asad comforting Zoya

😭😭😭

too bad...u killed Aapi & Jeeju...😡
i really felt very bad...😭
but Asad consoling her tht too barging in SM ws so so brilliant... reminded me of the Grave scene...but this ws more painful thn tht...😭

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Sonam

@angel2930

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

#7 Dilshad leaves, AsYa alone

nice update...👏
loved the way Zoya made Asad undrstnd tht she is alwys there...
and the emotional consummation ws so good...specially Asad asking her b4 taking a step further...good...👏

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: angel2930
wowww...👏
read all the 7 at one time & loved all the 7...❤️
sry fr d late comment...😊
but i'll give a brief comment fr each one...😉

I really appreciate ur effort to strt this thread...keep it up dear...loved it...
and thnks fr the pm...😊

WOW!

Thank you so much for all the comments! It makes my writer heart so happy to see such appreciation for my words! 🤗

And leaving a review for each little part makes it so special!

I won't lie - it is hard to keep up with all the prompts that I have been getting, but I think its worth getting my words down and kind of expanding my own horizon!

Keep the love coming and I'll keep the stories trickling!

😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs
That was just superb n hottt... Loved d way they understand eachother... Keep posting...

~JAZ~

Thanks, Jaz!

Glad you liked it!

I'll try to post another soon, but no promises!😃😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Loved the story. Very emotional and the way it was written conveyed their emotions so well.

Please pm me for the next one too.

Thank you! 😃😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: nilusoni
gr8 one loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for next prompt
continue soon

Thank you !

😃😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Vacation os...Simply Brilliant👍🏼

The last 4 lines had me cracking up😆 Dilshaad is not the typical mother - in - law...

This entire family was so sweet...and you make the kids sound so adorable and cute...😃

What a beautiful imaginary world you have created dear...🤗

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

that was beautiful.
i loved the way you portrayed asad's pain and how zoya understood him unlike she does in the show.

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Sick asad was great👍🏼

I would love to have seen something like this on the show...

I'm really not happy that dilshaad chose to live with Rashid...At first i thought he was ok but as the serial progressed i think he is plain idiotic, selfish and spineless...

At first i thought razia & gafoor trapped him with shireen but when you really look at it, he had to have strayed first in order to get trapped...

Enough of my ranting

I dont blame asad for behaving with his mother in that way...But i still like dilshaad too...

Lovely drabble dear