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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Asya in NY - 3 years leap

Sweetness overload❤️

This was just superb...Fantastic...Amazing...Brilliant...etc...😆

What a way with words you have dear...

Waiting for the day to arrive when our screens show us this beautiful vision you have created...asya and their little family

Well at the rate Gul is going, we probably will be waiting the next 3 years for it😆 Well i hope QH is not over by then...

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@Zola029

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

awesome one !

loved how zoya understood asad here !

it was amazing !

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NEHA

@SacredLove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Nice prompt
love it 😉

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Kids are away, and the parents will play😆😲

This was beautifully written👍🏼

OMG...The romance was sensational...

What a feast for the senses

I'm still in dreamland...

You have written this erotic scene so fabulously...It was subtle and sexy at the same time...

The last line was just so 😆... about putting their clothes back on...Zoya is so cute and funny...She has become a mommy after all

Brilliant writing👏

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

First day of school was cute and adorable👍🏼

Another well written piece by you...

This brought back so many nostalgic memories for me...With my parents leaving me at school😃 In my case there were lots of tears and tantrums...I was a dramatic child😃 Still am😆

You captured this moment flawlessly...You are an amazing writer👍🏼

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Asad consoling zoya...Shooo...This was an emotional one😭

It made me a bit teary eyed...

This was an exceptionally good piece of writing...Different from your others writings...

The way you captured asad and zoya's emotions were amazing...Zoya's pain was tangible...

Great concept and well executed by you👍🏼

This shows your versatility ( sometimes my spelling sucks) as a writer...👏

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

raw emotions shook me

she comforted him in a way she best could

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Dilshaad leaves, asya all alone...😉

This was simply superbly written👏

Asad's insecurities, zoya's determination to be there for him always was captured effortlessly...

This should have happened in the serial...It would have been a mindblowing scene...

You have out done yourself once again...👍🏼

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Mayee2217

@Mayee2217

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Your writing is just so soulful😊 Loved it😳

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Dearest Simi...

I have been away for a few days and had so much catching up to do...You have written several amazing pieces that it's difficult to actually say which was the best...

I ❤️ them all...To say that this was a pleasure to read would be a mild understatement...

I aplogise for commenting so many times but i felt that each piece deserves it's own individual comment and i personally would love to see this moving on to a second thread😉

Had you been standing here next to me in Durban at this very moment, my mom would have applied a black tika to you and turned salt to ward of the evil eye...Because you are such a brilliant and talented writer👏

Your creativity astounds me...I always look forward to a pm from you because that means to me i'm about to be thrilled with another fabulous piece of writing...

Hats off to you...and a standing ovation for the entertaining reads...You truly make my day😃

This is just for you...For being you and delivering some of the most outstanding work ever🤗

One of your many fans

Navi...xoxoxox