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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

I cried... 😭
this was too sad

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

so sad for zoya 😭

sab log pagal hai Sm mai 😡😡

good that asad was here for her !

it was so well-written👏

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Again a beautifully written os. Thanks for the pm n waiting for more.

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oliveira

@oliveira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

amazing you made me cry omg just sweet asad😉😉😉

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Beautifully penned..

Full of pathos and pain..

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@ChaiTeaWali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Amazing! Very beautifully written, so emotional :(

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

RES

This was so painful yet beautifully penned down. You truly are a multi faceted writer. You have the cute factor, gutter factor and the emotion and pain factors all pegged to perfection. I loved how she refused to believe that they were gone. How she was searching, hoping against hope that Asad was playing a cruel joke on her, like when he brought her to SM.

The way she kept saying it wasn't true, it broke my heart. The way you described her crying broke it more. And honestly. My second favourite part was Ayaan. The way he stood up for them was mind blowing. I'm so happy reading that.

My favourite part, "Mr. Khan, why does everyone leave me?" I was tearing up. Poor Zoya 😭

This was a truly a good prompt. Now that I see you doing emotional ones Imma ask for some stuff myself that I wish I had seen on the show 😃

Idea#1: The conversation in the car after Asad proposes to Zoya publicly at the airport. 😃 I wanna see that awkwardness, and stolen glances. I mean he waited until they were home to deflate her ballon of romantic (unrealized lol) illusions.

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago