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madina12

@madina12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Another well written piece...
Really heart-breaking 😭

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

loved it and thanks for considering the idea. I always love asad consoling a crying zoya even though it is sad to read or watch

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Mehr

@mehr05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

a very emotional and sad OS! u wrote it beautifully and described Zoya's pain and anguish so well

thanks for the PM and keep up the great job u r doing 😊

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

I feel like crying aftr reading this...

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Indeed different !

Emotional and beautiful👍🏼

The SM people are irritating as ever😡

thanks for the pm

😃😃😃

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

so emotional

fling bad ...

nice wrk

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

hey it was awesome his actions her reactions and the way he eneterred the house only to find her and bothered nothing

it was awesome can you write sequel or the after effects such as he just took her and gave the answers back to them and took her to khan mention he wanted to state there the one she loves never leave her alone and he is going to prove her wrong he wont leave her alone in that mess

thanks for pm

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

WOW...! this one was truly powerful nd emotional... it made me cryy...! Very beautifully written...! D last line was quite powerful what zoya said..! Feeling bad fr zoya..!

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

This is so emotional😭...Everyone dearest to Zoya left her but her Mr.Khan is there for her,to hold her,to love her,to comfort her his whole life...!

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: mochhug
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This was so painful yet beautifully penned down. You truly are a multi faceted writer. You have the cute factor, gutter factor and the emotion and pain factors all pegged to perfection. I loved how she refused to believe that they were gone. How she was searching, hoping against hope that Asad was playing a cruel joke on her, like when he brought her to SM.

The way she kept saying it wasn't true, it broke my heart. The way you described her crying broke it more. And honestly. My second favourite part was Ayaan. The way he stood up for them was mind blowing. I'm so happy reading that.

My favourite part, "Mr. Khan, why does everyone leave me?" I was tearing up. Poor Zoya 😭

This was a truly a good prompt. Now that I see you doing emotional ones Imma ask for some stuff myself that I wish I had seen on the show 😃

Idea#1: The conversation in the car after Asad proposes to Zoya publicly at the airport. 😃 I wanna see that awkwardness, and stolen glances. I mean he waited until they were home to deflate her ballon of romantic (unrealized lol) illusions.

Monica!

Thank you!

I told you, no? I am awesome 😎

🤣 🤣🤣

I would imagine her reluctance to digest the news. It was really challenging for me to get down the emotions of this degree.

A little happy dance over the success of the story!

Great idea - the airport one. Let me see how I can spin that!!