Asya Pyaar Ya... Part 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So i just the storyline a bit on this one because if Zoya got stabbed she should have gone to the hospital because its serious so iam carrying on from where they find Zoya unconscious in Asad 's arms.

His heart ceased to beat, he couldn't breath... His eyes couldn't see anything, he only wanted to see Zoya, safe...
Asad : ' Zoya !! Get up now !! ' He cupped her cheeks and cried
Asad : ' A - ammi plz Doctor ko phone kijiye ' he pleaded
Dilshaad : ' Asad hume ambulance bulani chahiye ' she said while she had tears in her eyes.

IN THE HOSPITAL :
Zoya is in the hospital when the Doctor comes out
Asad : ' Doctor w-woh thik to hain na ? '
Doctor : ' Abhi unko hosh nahi aya hai aur woh sans nhi le rahi hai
We have to do an operation urgently.
Asad : ' Doctor plz kuch kariye plz save her main unke bina nahi jee sakta' he said worriedly
Doctor : ' Isme unki jaan bhi ja sakti hai r u sure ?
Asad is shocked but has no choice
Asad: ' Jee ' he said with his voice trembling
Doctor : ' Yeh papers sign karne hai magar aap kya lagte hai unke? ' he asked
Asad : ' woh meri biwi hai ' he said ( DID HE JUST SAY THT ? Wow! )
The doctor hands the paper to Asad and Asad signs
it with his hands trembling.
The operation begins...
Asad : ' Ammi woh thik toh ho jayengi ' he asked while he cryed uncontrollably
Dilshaad : ' Don't worry Asad ' she consoled him.
All are waiting .
1 hour later :
Doctor comes out.
Asad: ' Doctor what happened ? ' he asked
Doctor : ' I am sorry but she's no more ' he said . All are distraught except for Tanveer who is smirking.
Asad : ' What ! No plz doctor sach bataiye ' he said crying
Doctor : ' she is no more ' he replied . Dilshaad and Najma are shocked .
Asad : ' aap kya keh rahe hain ?! Aap ko logo ki jaan bachani chahiye aur aap ! ' he said angrily and rushed to the operation room where he saw her lying on the bed. He walked towards her and sat next to her.
Asad: 'Why ?! Answer me !! Mujhe chod ke kyun gayi aap? How can you just leave me ?!
Nahi. Zoya utho ! Utho! ' he cryed and placed his head on her bed .
Her finger moved . Asad felt her fingers but wasnt sure he checked her pulses
Yes! She was alive !
Asad : ' Zoya ! ' he said looking happy
Zoya : ' Mr Khan mein apko chod ke kahi nahi ja rahi hoon... - ' she was out of breath
Asad : ' Shhh. Main doctor ko bulata hoon ' he replied smiling

TO BE CONTINUED ...
So how was it ? Thnks for reading byee. Enjoy!!




Srry for the confusion :


Edited by masteruni6 - 11 years ago

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Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you have to link part 1 and part 2... edit below
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome..
So cute part..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Where is part 2 n please edit the title with the pgs. .
Like

Part 1 : page 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was nice..
but can u plzz tell ke where is part 1 if this is part 2?? n if this is part 1 then where is part 2..
n plz edit the title with pages like part 1 : page 1...!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome loved it
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww lovelyy plss pm me n wheres part 2
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plz update and pm me

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