Asya Pyaar Ya ... Part 4

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Hey Part 4 finally here srry was busy .

Everyone is eatin dinner . Zoya is excitedly running downstairs to ask dilshaad for the permission.
Zoya : ' Phuppi mera best friend ara hai can he stay here ? ' she asked quickly
Dilshaad : ' Haan kyun nahi agar woh tumhara best friend hai toh of course
Aur tumhari Nikah mein bhi attend kar sakta hai. ' she replied having no objection whatsoever
Zoya : ' Thnks Phuppi you're the best! ' She thanked.
Asad : ' Ammi Miss Farooqui aise hi kisi ere gere ( stranger ) ko iss ghar mei- ' he is cut by Zoya
Zoya : ' Achha agar Tanveer yahan reh sakti hai toh Atif kyun nahi ? Woh koyi era gera nahi hai woh mera best friend hai ! Aur waise mein bhi aab se lakh goona better hai okay ? '
Asad : ' Toh unse hi Nikah karligiye na ? ' he said being annoyed
Zoya : ' Majboori hai ! ' she snappe at him . Tanveer is smiling
Najma : ' Okay Okay Okay ! Kya bataya naam unka ? Haan Atif so how did you guys meet ... ' Zoya and Najma blabber about Zoya and Atif while Asad is ignoring them but one thing caught his head / eyes ? Maybe ?
Zoya : ' ... You know Najma he had looks to die for and thats why i had a crush on him hes so handsome i hope woh abhi bhi witna hi fit aur charming hai. ' she said she was about to continue but she noticed Asad was there and kept quiet .
Najma : ' Really ! Chaliye dekh te hai what so special ki Zoya Farooqui ko unpe crush tha! ' she stopped as she also noticed Asad ' I mean kuch nahi ' she diverted the topic somehow ?

AFTER A WHILE :
The bell rings . Asad is about to go and open the door but Zoya runs past himand opens it .
Zoya :' Atif !!!! ' she said excitedly ( Actually Atif is Karan Wahi so do the imagining i thought they would make a nice couple but because it was Asya so i kept him as Atif . He is sooo handsome i swear down! Okay enough of tht lets continue )
Atif ( Karan Wahi ) : ' Hey beautiful! ' he said with his arms spread out for a hug . Zoya jumped and hugged him tight ' I missed you ! ' she continued Asad is about go mental as he is red of rage / jealousy ( Lol )
Atif : ' Hmmm not bad Miss Zoya Farooqui you have successfully achieved
This certificate for maintaining your figure for a long time ' he joked
Zoya : ' Ab andar aoge ya nahin ? ' she asked
Atif : ' Sure after you madam ' he replied and walked in. Asad was furious but stopped and thought * why do i care? her life no w8 i do care idk but i dont want her near Atif i dont no y *
Zoya : ' Yeh meri Phuppi hai aur Najma ' she introduced them to each ther and finally came Asad and Tanveer 's turn ' Yeh Mr . Khan ki friend Tanveer and yeh Mr - ' Zoya was interrupted by Atif
Atif : ' Mr Khan right hi im Atif Zoyas friend waise aap ka full name kya hai ? 'he asked curiously
Asad : ' Asad ... Asad Ahmed Khan ' he replied
Atif : ' Nice name ' Atif could see Asad wasn't an jolly person.
Atif: ' So Cherry tumhara fiancee ? Kahan hai ? I dont see him here ' he looked around . Everyone was confused .
Zoya : ' He is my fiancee Mr Asad Ahmed Khan ' she explained
Atif : ' Him? Oh im so sorry! ' he apologised
Zoya : ' You look tired Muffin chalo apna room dikhati hoon ' she said as she held him by the wrist .
Asad was very very angry he was about to burst out but controlled himself.

IN ZOYA'S ROOM :
Atif : ' Good choice ' he said puzzling Zoya
Zoya : ' Matlab ? ' he asked looking confused
Atif : ' You no tumhara Mr Khan but merse better... I mean ...'he teased her .

TO BE CONTINUED
PRECAP :
Atif : ' I love you ' he said
Zoya : ' Me too ' she replied
Asad is distraught his zoya loves som1 else ? How?


Dont be shocked just a twist nothing to worry about
Srry for updating late i was very busy had to finish off loads
Of h/w soz will update soon
Enjoy!

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SprinklesOfLove thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz send buddy request if u want pms it takes a long time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update !
finally we get to see jealous asad 😆
omg the precap !!!😕
i'm pretty sure this must some plan of cherry and muffin 😆 to make asad confess his love for zoya !!
well i really hope so 😆
eager to read more !
continue soon
and thank you for the pm (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice thanx for the pm i have sent u a buddy request please continue sending me PM's and update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow so cute update.. 👏
sorry for the late comment...😛
thank u so much for the pm... 😊
i loved this jealousy asad..
.😳
karan wahi as atif😳

excited buy ur precap...⭐️
interesting.. continue soon plz.. 😃
i loved it completely/...
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loooved it!!!!!😉Awesome update👏Jealous Ahmed Khan my faaavourite😳Cherry??muffin??😆Hmmm so atif tapak gate??lol...Asad red with anger,loving it even more...Jaldi continue karo plzzzAnd I guess in precap itz zoya n atif acting trying to make asad jealous...😉Thnx for the pm...Lovepinky😃
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plzzz pm me...n plss dont make zoya-atif...hope u wil not...n loads of wowww

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