Asya Pyaar Ya... Part 1

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Hey guyz this is the new series yes Tanveer is in it but the storyline has changed so don't worry
it is what quboolians wanted so yh hope u like it thnks!

Jashn - e - Bahar ceremony

Zoya is checking the main switch unaware of Tanveer behind her with a knife in her hands.
Zoya ons the light and turns around but Tanveer stabs her in the stomach . Zoya screams
Asad , Najma and Dilshaad are shocked and Asad rushes towards Zoya as fast as he can
and she falls into his arms unconscious .

Asad : ' Zoyaaa!!! ' . he screams when he found blood on his hands. Dilshaad and Najma are crying
while Tanveer is smirking. Tears fill Asad's eyes.
Asad : ' Zoya !! Get up Zoya!! Ammi call the Doctor ! ' Dilshaad calls the Doctor Najma is crying and shouting. Asad is very tensed.
Najma: ' Zoya get up!! ' she screamed . Tanveers smile changes into anger * Jammy Zoya mar chuki hai. there no point * she thought but she come and fake crys .

Tanveer : 'Jammy yeh kyun nhi uth rahi ?' she fake crys.
Asad : ' Zoya plz get up! You can't do this to me plz Zoya ! Don't do this! ' he cried .😭

IN ZOYA'S ROOM:

The Doctor is there and checks Zoya, meanwhile they are outside the room waiting worriedly
Asad: ' Ammi woh thik to ho jaengi na? ' He asks
Dilshaad crys and nods ( yes ) The Doctor comes outside.
Asad : ' Doctor is she alright ? '
Doctor : ' Abhi toh thik hai lekin woh unconscious hain and she needs bed rest. Unko kisi bhi tara stress mat dijiye ga aur yeh medicines bhi deni hain. ' Asad thnks Allah and says
Asad : ' Jee Doctor main unka pura khayaal rakhoon ga thnks . Kya main unhe dekh saktahoon?
Doctor : ' Yes take care of her. ' With tht the Doctors goes and all enter Zoya's room.

Asad sits next to her and Dilshaad sits on the other side and Najma and Tanveer are standing up . Zoya is unconscious n Asad is crying uncontrollably. Dilshaad signals Tanveer and Najma to leave them alone. They walk out of the room.
Asad : ' I'm S- Sorry Zoya. Yeh sab meri galti hai .' Zoya is slowly gaining consciousness and slowly
opens her eyes and says...
Zoya : ' Nhi Mr Khan woh Ta - .. ' she stops realising tht if she tells him he wouldn't believe her as Tanveer is his best friend . Asad looks confused.
Zoya : ' Apki koy galti nhi Mr Kh- ouch! ' she is in pain as she trys to slide up but hurts herself .

Asad : ' Yeh aap kya karrahi hain ?! Doctor ne kaha hai na ki apko bed rest chahiye. A -Aap letiye.'
Zoya has a faint smile as she sees how caring he is.
Asad : ' Aap hans kyun rahi hain ? ' he asks curiously
Zoya : ' Nothing ' He is abt to go when Zoya hold his hands and stops him.
Zoya: ' Plz Mr Khan mat jaiye i - i dont want to be alone ' she pleaded and he nodded and stayed


TO BE CONTINUED :
Hope you liked it plz giv feedback if i should continue or not . Didnt proof - read so srry for mistakes
I guess this is wht Quboolians wanted right?
Thnks to Zola007 who helped me with this topic

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jacinta_91

i like it,pls continue



Thnks i will. 😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Very nice continue soon and please PM me for the next part 😃
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Really great start !!! continue soon ! 😊
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Please continue soon

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