|Shattered... Again| ~ An Asad Drabble

Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: NAVI55
This was just awesome👍🏼

You have written asad's angst brilliantly...I could feel his every emotion...

It felt as if it was happening to me and not asad...

Write more please

Thank you so much for your comment! i tried to do my best 😊

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
i just luvd it ...
🤗

Thank you so much didi! 😃

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
Fabulous :)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
so touching...asad's inner turmoil was depicted beautifully!!!excellent work...

Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
Heart touching...U've written Aaas's inner turmoil very beautifully... 👏 👏

you mean Asad's. 😆 and thank you!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Very emotional i just wanted to kill rashid
thanx for pm
do pm me for your next work

Rashid is basically scum. Of the worst kind. And thanks for the comment!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: chibi_deea
You are very good at writing this kind of genre. 👏
Your description of Asad's inner feelings is amazing and beautiful. One could actually feel his pain and helplessness.
Thanks a lot for the pm 😊

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I am really glad that you liked my effort!!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: awesome
This was just awesome

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: shraddha.m
vry vry heart touchng... 😭 amazing post..

Thanks a lottt!!!

Originally posted by: akaswan
Just amazing 👏

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: _Nabeela_
Awesome

😃😃😃

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ZFAAK
Too good...
Exactly what Asad may be thinking in that episode...
My poor baby...😭

Thanks a lot for your comment! Glad it was worth your time!!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Applef
beautiful..

poor asad..

he is so heart broken..💔

still is 😭😭

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen
lovely
amazing

and yh the forum activity has dropped

pull up guys

its still constant. At 3. 😭 😭 and thank you!!!

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
this Drabble was beautifully written! you wrote exactly the way I felt when I was watching that scene with Dilshaad and Asad. the way Asad is feeling is just heartbreaking and you did an amazing job showing that. I think you should write angst themed stories more often!

Thanks a lot!! I wrote exactly what i felt... and I'm really glad you feel the same way 😊 I wll try writing more in this genre... but its upsetting actually 😆

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Srija C. Burman

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Posted: 11 years ago

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