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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Oldestfan

I do not understand how a gitl who has spent her life in agony of losing her mother and searching for her father, sudeenly develop the wings of enlightenment just because she was lucky enough to fall for someone who loved her so much he overlooked her own mistakes, begged over and over again for firgiveness for his own, left all semblance of propriety and correctness behind and came out and took her back into his home, to protect and keep her sake and not take advantage of her, this very mans love she wants to compare to her dosts? She may feel for Dilshad, and she is probably right, but Dilshad is going back to what? A man jiske liye matlab se mohabbat hain, as Ayaan so very rightly said. Agar un dono ke beech sacchi mohabbat hoti, toh Rashid would never have done what he did.

If she truly loves this man, can she not see his abandonment, his despair, his fear at his mother putting herself in so much jeopardy? Ishq par zor nahi hota sure, but then in that case does Shireen not love Rashid too?

If I were Zoya, i may have said the same things to him, but I would have also said, lets make it easier for Ammi. Dont force her to this choice. She does not have to choose. Even though we all know that right now she may not be making the right choice, she still deserves to try one last time. To see for herself how badly tjis is going to fail. And we will both be there for her always. This is perhaps the only way she will heal and move on. And we will be at home waiting for her when she comes.


I find it incredible that people can judge Asad for being blind to his fathers so called reconciliation attempts. Did they just see how Ayaan, the pampered baby boy turned his back on his father?


OMG!
I really respect with your pov. I think that Zoya is being impulsive, thinking from her heart. She still does not get the gravity of the situation... She never really does grow up. Once in a while she says a lot of grown up stuff... but then after a few happy shappy episodes, she's back to square one. She's not wrong from her pov, but she just does not understand what kind of a jerk Rashid really is. Let me not even comment on that guy, i will just get banned 😆 Ayaan was right in leaving SM... but wrong in leaving Humzie. He said that he doesn't want to become his father... but he actually does that. Thank you for your valuable comment 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Prizi

Awesum...beautifully written

can't see him like this


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ranz

The angst of of seventeen years of Asad Ahmed Khan Life--beautiful! Ammi oh Ammi why why?


😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Thanks 😊


Thank you!

Originally posted by: veenisha

superb yaar loved it


Glad you did!


It is... 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

very heart touching...

felt really bad for him...
felt all the emotion...
superb...


Thanks a lottt for the comment!!! Glad you liked my effort!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiesanya

such a painful story.. it is so sad..

glad u write something this beautiful


I am really glad you like my work 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RiDz_rox

srija this is beautiful.. Asad my baby 😭


Ridz didiii 🤗 Asad Meelaaa bachhhaaa 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Addu16

I cried when i watched the show
N i cried when i read this


Waterworks were entirely unintended!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

Dude!!! This is just awesome! I was saddened reading it! I can imagine how Asad feels!

You gave me a lump in my throat! Just amazingly written! 👏

Ek baat boloon? That should be your pic in your siggy, because you are a thinker yaar! 😆 🤗


Thank you very much! Even i got a lump in my throat while writing this 😭
Imagine a female elephant in my siggy instead of Zoya. That's me. 😆

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