|Shattered... Again| ~ An Asad Drabble - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heart touching...U've written Aaas's inner turmoil very beautifully... 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very emotional i just wanted to kill rashid
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vry vry heart touchng... 😭 amazing post..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just amazing 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good...
Exactly what Asad may be thinking in that episode...
My poor baby...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful..

poor asad..

he is so heart broken..💔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely
amazing

and yh the forum activity has dropped

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this Drabble was beautifully written! you wrote exactly the way I felt when I was watching that scene with Dilshaad and Asad. the way Asad is feeling is just heartbreaking and you did an amazing job showing that. I think you should write angst themed stories more often!
Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, that was amazing! Beautiful. :D I think you did an awesome job! <3<3<3
-Fari.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I do not understand how a gitl who has spent her life in agony of losing her mother and searching for her father, sudeenly develop the wings of enlightenment just because she was lucky enough to fall for someone who loved her so much he overlooked her own mistakes, begged over and over again for firgiveness for his own, left all semblance of propriety and correctness behind and came out and took her back into his home, to protect and keep her sake and not take advantage of her, this very mans love she wants to compare to her dosts? She may feel for Dilshad, and she is probably right, but Dilshad is going back to what? A man jiske liye matlab se mohabbat hain, as Ayaan so very rightly said. Agar un dono ke beech sacchi mohabbat hoti, toh Rashid would never have done what he did.
If she truly loves this man, can she not see his abandonment, his despair, his fear at his mother putting herself in so much jeopardy? Ishq par zor nahi hota sure, but then in that case does Shireen not love Rashid too?

If I were Zoya, i may have said the same things to him, but I would have also said, lets make it easier for Ammi. Dont force her to this choice. She does not have to choose. Even though we all know that right now she may not be making the right choice, she still deserves to try one last time. To see for herself how badly tjis is going to fail. And we will both be there for her always. This is perhaps the only way she will heal and move on. And we will be at home waiting for her when she comes.


I find it incredible that people can judge Asad for being blind to his fathers so called reconciliation attempts. Did they just see how Ayaan, the pampered baby boy turned his back on his father?

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