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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 12...

That is a scary twist... to say how did that happen...
zoya family to narrow... they did not even question her...
just confirm throw her out..
very mean...zoya dont believe asad...

yeah it is great twist in the story that will unfold slowly...

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Ayesha

@-Aashu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 13..

so mess up...zoya family thinking zoya is happy..
asad family talking about wealth...

asad missing his friend...

he don get any clue about the marriage...

their sudden marriage is mystery...

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Ayesha

@-Aashu-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 14...

zoya did come down from her anger...both miss each other...
asad want prove he can do it...but he fail...
asad's parents to much...
and sometimes i do think his a behind all this wedding mess...
just want asad to be more responsible...

why do you think that wedding mess was created by him?

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Chapter 15...

Things changing... wow .. nice they come closer playful manner...
but asad sudden change everything...
zoya feeling lonely so she start depending on asad...
she start missing him...
Now asad is avoiding zoya... poor zoya

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Wow asad got a contract without zoya's help...

nice after few days... their eyes meet...

what is going to happen next...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: aashuu07

why do you think that wedding mess was created by him?

Coz maybe he wants asad to be responsible... and he knows
zoya doing all the work... try to make them fight... zoya
will distance herself from asad...

or maybe asad's mother... 😕

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

nice.

loved it.

now asad is avoiding zoya. n asya missing eachother.

hope they will be together soon

plz update soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: aashuu07

Aww, you are too sweet. It is a big thing thing for me when my readers enjoy and appreciate my work to the full. Thank you so much for being here. 😛

i know coz ... i cant write like you... so i be there reader...😃 😃