OBLIVION: asya TS *note on pg 9:) - Page 6

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

OH MY GAWWWD Elenaa Di!!!!!! You write?! God the moment I saw this I got so excited!!!!! Man You are awesome!😃

thank you yaaarrr😳

Also I am so sad that I am so Bloody late to comment😭...I just logged in after ages...sorry! I so so wanted to be first!!!!😔 You didn't even tell me!😔

its okay yaarrr...i know u hav been busy😉

First of all I just LOVE your title... really do! 👍🏼

i love it too😊

The introduction itself is very very impactful👏...Beautifully written...⭐️

.He was staring into nothingness.He was devoid of all sorts of emotions.He was numb...he coudnt feel anything not even the thorn that had pricked his right hand an hour back and his hand was now bleeding.

These lines explain a lot about his character...I guess Asad is one poor soul!

How come the most happiest day of his life had turned into a NIGHTMARE.

Lovely line...Puts it all together in a wonderful way...

shukriya😳

Very interesting and an intriguing start...You know How I love angsty stories...So so looking forward to this!

How come THE Asad Ahmed Khan was now just a living corpse??

Oh man! This was like the best line! Makes me wanna know the answer...👏

you will know it in d next part😉

I can tell you how great the beginning is...AMAZING...AMAZING...AMAZING! You have used very powerful lines,really...Its great to read!😃

Ooh The First chapter!

.He had that one of his rare smiles on his face.

Rare and breathtaking!(Sorry for the fangirling!😛😆)

its okay...everyone does tat here including me😆

But TODAY he had woken up with a new resolve to get back what rightfully belonged to him

What a line! Aaap tho cha gaye!👏

😳😳

Zoya's red and puffy eyes reflected her pain and that she had cried herself to sleep.She had dark circles under her eyes

Aww my poor Baby!😭

i knowww😭

As soon as she looked up and locked her gaze with that person, she FROZE.

Arrey! Why did you stop?????? Now this is wrong! Too short!

i know it was too short...next wala will be long enough😆

You have made me all restless for what will happen...and Pweeezeee...make it super duper long the next time!😳😃

Aap tho bade chupe rustam nikle! OMG Di why didn't you ever tell me that you are such a great writer?

Really di even if you say that its your first attempt...it doesn't feel like one! You are such a pro at this! Please please keep writing...and I am gussa that u never mentioned this!😡😆

Anyways update this SUPER SOON! Really and please please please PM me! I am in love with this...always wanted to read a detailed encounter of A-Z in siddiqui mansion...and what happened after that...why is Asad all sad and broken? A GREAT story You have woven here👏

Please keep writing and now that u have started...I will be waiting to read many many Fanfics from you!

Stay Awesome dearie!<3

Love and hugs!

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Res!

Unres.

Hiyas! Me is backito!

So, getting straight to the update:

Too short missy .

i knowww yaarr...next wala will be long😆

O_O Guess I know what it feels like when you ask me to make my updates longer 😆. Chalo, no problem.

yesss😆😆

A good chapter nonetheless.

thank youu😳

My favourite line: But TODAY he had woken up with a new resolve to get back what rightfully belonged to him.

Oh how I love this possessive side of him

i tooo loveee ittt

Wow, the guys must be whizzing past at a high speed if it only took him 15 minutes 😆. Well somebody's determined.

yuppp...very much determined...i guess he shud hav driven a private jet...5 secs mein pahunch jata😆

Aww, my Zoe's crying *starts bawling*. How can she think she doesn't care for him?

state of mind bichari ka acha nhi hai😭

Why do I have a feeling that it's not going to Asad that caused Zoya to freeze 😕? See, whenever there's a cliff hanger like that and I assume that it is Asad, it always turns out to be someone else. *dramatic mode* Curse my bad luck!

So Tash, when are we getting the next update? 😳

hahahahaha...lets seee woh hai kaun😉

Originally posted by: elenaa

p.s Raz...i wanna ask u something...earlier my name was Tasha(wich i really liked😳)...then abhi u made it Tash...aise karke tum har baar ek ek letter reduce karogi kya???😆

Originally posted by: elenaa

Mahi! do u hav any idea how much I love you ❤️

thank you sooo muchhh for tat honest opinion...you know wat I had also not expected this from myself 😆

thank you thhank you...I know this part was ahort...next wala wud be long 😃

Originally posted by: elenaa

IMPORTANT NOTE:

heyooo people!thank you for giving a good response to this...i really dint expect that😃

BUT i hav a bad news...i wud be able to update this only after 15 dec as i hav my ca entrance on tat date...so i hav to study pretty hard and upar se my college is reopening soon...so really busy i will be😭

i hope u will wait and wont lose interest in this😊

And for all my wonderful friends on this forum whose updates i read,i know i hav reserved my posts to comment wich ill surely unres wen ill be back😃(till then miss me n my long comments😆)

much love❤️