OBLIVION: asya TS *note on pg 9:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hellooo forum people...well im always the one to posts comments and appreciate our wonderful writers on this forum but i just felt like writing something myself😆

WARNING:this is my first attempt at writing anything EVER in my life...so please bear wid me😳


INTRODUCTION:


A broken man sat in a garden that overlooked the sea.For how long he had been there,no one knew.He wa staring into nothingness.He was devoid of all sorts of emotions.He was numb...he coudnt feel anything not even the thorn that had pricked his right hand an hour back and his hand was now bleeding.He did not know how had this happened.
How come the most happiest day of his life had turned into a NIGHTMARE.

How come THE Asad Ahmed Khan was now just a living corpse??

He closed his eyes and memories of what had happened a few days ago flashed in his mind.

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well so how was it???

should i continue???⭐️ please leave ur pretty comments behind😳


INDEX

part 1: pg 4

note:pg 9

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maha2012 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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looking forward plzz continue😊
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Pls conntinue dear...its interesting...,and pls do pm me...
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wow...seems to be interesting...plz continue soon..
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OFCOURSE u need to continue...these lines very very heart wrenching...curious to know how the story unfolds..so go on..n write away...we r waitin...😃
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Wow Its interesting..
Continue soon..😳
Thanks for the pm dear 🤗
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Seems interesting!
Continue soon dea :) :)
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goood start!! plz cont soon!!
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intresting
cont soon
and can u please pm me
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NATASHA!!

wow... this was a great start

I would love to read something from you

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