OBLIVION: asya TS *note on pg 9:)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Short but super cute..
Cant wait update soon dear..

Quote

akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Very good udapte 😃

But i doubt that it's Asad so udapte soon please 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

tht was soo amazing..luved it..

Quote

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

too short. but nice do continue soon.

Quote

Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Really nice. but why was the part so short? are you seeing whether we can take in your writing or not, lolz just kidding.

update the next part soon.

Love.

Quote

-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Res!

Unres.

Hiyas! Me is backito!

So, getting straight to the update:

Too short missy .

O_O Guess I know what it feels like when you ask me to make my updates longer 😆. Chalo, no problem.

A good chapter nonetheless.

My favourite line: But TODAY he had woken up with a new resolve to get back what rightfully belonged to him.

Oh how I love this possessive side of him

Wow, the guys must be whizzing past at a high speed if it only took him 15 minutes 😆. Well somebody's determined.

Aww, my Zoe's crying *starts bawling*. How can she think she doesn't care for him?

Why do I have a feeling that it's not going to Asad that caused Zoya to freeze 😕? See, whenever there's a cliff hanger like that and I assume that it is Asad, it always turns out to be someone else. *dramatic mode* Curse my bad luck!

So Tash, when are we getting the next update? 😳

Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 12 years ago

Quote

sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

You had to wirte a story about the current track? Like reading the written updates occasionally wasn't torture enough? Zoya better die in this, thus the reason for their separation. I detest zoyaan