FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Asad irritated by the girls fussing over glasses and jug.

Rohan praised the whole family in turns..

Her I pad not in charging. .

Asad and zoya trying to figure out how the

Presentation got delated..

Slowly we are heading to another action ..

Amazing..

Thanks for the pm.

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

I LOVED IT AND HOW ASYA ARE DOWNSTAIRS AT NIGHT THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE 😃

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

wonderful...girls r going crazy over rohan...poor asad!!!
so there's someone trying to ruin asad's business...interesting!!!
continue soon

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deziqt611

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!

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Ayra Nuzhat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Fab update!!

Whats wrong with Zoya and Najma??😲 So much for a jug and glasses

No doubt, Asad thinks they are being really silly!!😆

And the mystery begins!! The ipad is missing, files were deleted at Asad's office..Interesting!!

and thank you for the pm!

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
you are my favourite fanfiction author on this site in terms of writing BUT you don't update frequently so that makes you lose points. I try not to get hooked to your story, but any time an update comes I drop everything to read it. Please don't torture your fans.

It takes me a lot of time to post because my chapters are complex. I also have an extensive beta process with at least two people reading each chapter multiple times to make sure everything is in character, technically correct but still understandable, flows well and is fun to read.

I hope the results are worth the wait! 😛

Edited by PalyGirl - 11 years ago

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tvpremi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Hey! Firstly the update was superawesome as always, I love the way najma n zoya fangirl over Rohan n Asad's reaction its damn hilarious at times n the last part was gripping n secondly so very sorry I couldn't comment the last time as I m currently not that very active on forum nor I m faollowing qh that religiously but who can ignore such a wonderful writer like u. U just rock girl n keep writing your amazing mysteries n keep entertaining us. Eagerly waiting for your next update n thanks a lot for the pm...

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MayaB5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

I am a huge fan of your work and you never disappoint😊

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snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

too good and agai something spooky in asads office and ohh detective zoya she is a genius

thanks for the pm

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lover1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Great update. omg the double wording in the chapter was hilarious. I loved Asad and Zoya. Asad is so cute when he is jealous and omg Zoya does everything on purpose to push all his buttons. Can't wait for the next chapter.