FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Lol at the sexual innuendos, Paly 😆

I want to say one more time - LOVE the couplet! 😳😆

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Nicely done. I really like how you opened the mystery part of this story. They need to get their backup systems checked asap. 😃

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

No one on this forum can do mystery like you. Thats what make you one of the best!

I loved the update. And I cant wait to find out who did it! 😊

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Wow luv it...
Its superb...
Asad n zoya will work together again to get to the bottom of tis proble.
Eagerly waiting fr the next part...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

You seriously need to contact a publisher to publish all these!!!

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wreeti

@wreeti

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Good to see an update. I was waiting for it on fri.
Very nice update. The mystery starts.
Can't wait to read how rohan is involved in the whole drama.

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Loving it by each update!!!! Now the mystery comes up.

😉

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

WOOOWW!! Paly, you never fail to intrigue me with your AMAZING stories!! Honestly, each and every update just brings along something even better and interesting and keeps me waiting for the next!! You are just utter, sheer CLASS!! I just LOVE your stories, thank you very much for the FAB update and the pm also!! Lots of love.x