FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

cliffy again but the end was too good

she turned at hit the wall and it took several seconds to her brain to gain its him actually I just loved the way you portrayed him a wall always reliable

rohan was at the old lot what is it with that lot and why is he doing this so secretly is there anything hidden which he has business with and why didn't he shared it

but zoya is surely mad she managed to pull all It on herself what if rohan wasn't there ayaan and she would have hardly returned back with all those ten men jumping on them for killing them

thanks for pm

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linta

@Linnet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Please update soon

Loved it

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

😃😃

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Lavina

@volatile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

What an action packed and thrilling update Paly!

Asad really has no idea what to do with all those feelings Zoya evokes in his heart. I think like in the show, he is just coming to terms with the fact that he HAS a heart, but is not ready to accept that Zoya has already stolen it.

And to top it all, his worst nightmare is coming true now...Zoya is hurt and he might lose her. Lets hope he doesnt push her away again after she gets better. Or better yet, lets hope this time when he roars at her, she wont back away from the confrontation and force him to admit his feelings.

Also, it will be fun to watch Rohan fussing over Zoya (and he should cos she was injured due to him) and Asad not liking it one bit! I hope we get to witness a jealous and overprotective, yet loving Asad towards Zoya. 😳

Hope you had a good new festive season, and if you like to make our new year better, another update will do the trick! 😛

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

wow a superb n action pack update...

its fabulous...

beautifully written...

hats off...

hopefully they will be another update...

thx fr the pm...

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parthpathak31

@parthpathak31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

amazing...

waiting for the next.

😊👍🏼

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Superb update as usual
Mona & Rabbert plan always dangerous
Hope Zoya will tell Asad everything now
& let him handle
Continue soon plz
Add me in ur PM list
Thanks

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

great update
loved the detective in zoya alway a musibat
omg asad found her coming back and her wound
is so deep she could have died .
continue soon

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Whoop!! Whoop!! Aargh what do i say?? I mean, everything and i mean EVERYTHING is just PERFECT!!!!!! :D I just LOVE it!! Every single time, when i think you can't make it any better, you leave us on a cliff hanger like that and make it more better!! I just love how everything is turning out, especially the friendship between Ayaan and Zoya. And i just simply ADORE whatever is going between Asad and Zoya, i haven't got a clue as to what exactly it is yet, but i do know one thing... i AM LOVIN' IT!!! <3 Thank you sooo much for this and the pm, can't wait for the next update!! YIPPEE!! :D Lots of love... oh and one more thing... you is DA BEST!!!! xxx

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

I don't why I am a Rohan and Zoya fan so I was hoping he would come to her rescue. Personally, I don't think there is anything wrong with Rohan, he just has a secret but he is a nice guy. Idk even in Web of Lies I really liked Malek and I was right, he was never wrong. So even though Rohan is shady, I support him... I just hope he doesn't turn out to be the villain in this story.

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Yiippeee...
U updated finally...
Am on to reading it...sigh !!!

Yes, I read your sobbing pleas. I can't stand to make readers cry. Woops - maybe you shouldn't read the next chapter. It even makes me - the writer! - cry!