FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 38

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Ufff so much of cliffs!!
Its messing up my brains 😆

Your writing skills -Hats off!! 👏
Ps. Teach Asad to express his emotions please 😛

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Res

Finally finally you have updated eh

Stalked like anything

Loved the update but mused asya scenes

Plz plz update soon a d with more asad zoya and jealousy plz

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

Yes, I read your sobbing pleas. I can't stand to make readers cry. Woops - maybe you shouldn't read the next chapter. It even makes me - the writer! - cry!

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

The next chapter is only Asad and Zoya, but no jealousy. These two need to talk out their issues and start working as a team! Isn't that what we all really want?

Originally posted by: Rattyswami

Loved it😃 Rohan's silence is hurting more than just him now...but for once in my life I have to agree with the Tiger and the Sher...Zoya is most definitely a 'musibat magnet'...my god wht possessed that girl to try to save Rohan from 10 goons.

Hmmm...must I say it? ZOYA FAROOQUI CAN DO ANYTHING!

She got stabbed!!!!😲O.M.G😲😲 and the wound ended just slightly away from her artery...HEY BHAGWAN...this girl was better off in NY...atleast she wasn't getting physically injured at every turn...

But Zoya didn't live or love as intensely when she was in New York. She was a child there, protected by her Appi and Jejju. Now she's a mature adult who has to do her share - and then some! - to be the protector.

I hope Asad can protect her and pls don't make him FIGHT with her...for the first time realiszing it really hurts her😭 Zoya's emotions are so RAW and ur writing was SUPERB👏

Your wish is my command. He won't fight with her in the next chapter. By the end of the next chapter, you'll love him so much you'll want to crawl into the story and take him away from Zoya - I hope!

PS:- Can we readers expect two updates this week, to make up for the one we didn't get last week because of the HOLIDAY's...pls pls pls 😉

I'm sorry. My chapters are already so long and such hard work - I write THREE drafts which are read multiple time by my betas - that I cannot write more than one chapter a week.

And a very HAPPY NEW YEAR😃

Originally posted by: volatile

What an action packed and thrilling update Paly!

Asad really has no idea what to do with all those feelings Zoya evokes in his heart. I think like in the show, he is just coming to terms with the fact that he HAS a heart, but is not ready to accept that Zoya has already stolen it.

I think Asad has figured it out. It's Zoya who doesn't understand why it breaks her heart to even look at Asad when she's lying or hiding things from him.

And to top it all, his worst nightmare is coming true now...Zoya is hurt and he might lose her. Lets hope he doesnt push her away again after she gets better. Or better yet, lets hope this time when he roars at her, she wont back away from the confrontation and force him to admit his feelings.

Again, I think Asad has admitted his feelings. He said her every breath affects him like his own, told her that he's trying to protect her and checking up on her. Zoya is so willing to sacrifice herself to protect Dilshad that she's hurting Asad to do it.

Also, it will be fun to watch Rohan fussing over Zoya (and he should cos she was injured due to him) and Asad not liking it one bit! I hope we get to witness a jealous and overprotective, yet loving Asad towards Zoya. 😳

I don't like jealousy as a motivator. People should love who they love because they are worthy of love, not because someone else thinks they are. If a person is truly loved and cared for, they should feel secure. Asad has never had that focused, passionate love before. He should have the chance to embrace it before having to deal with other people testing that love.

Hope you had a good new festive season, and if you like to make our new year better, another update will do the trick! 😛

Next update is next Monday!

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

I don't why I am a Rohan and Zoya fan so I was hoping he would come to her rescue. Personally, I don't think there is anything wrong with Rohan, he just has a secret but he is a nice guy. Idk even in Web of Lies I really liked Malek and I was right, he was never wrong. So even though Rohan is shady, I support him... I just hope he doesn't turn out to be the villain in this story.

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

<font color="#cc00ff">Asad is expressing his emotions! He told Zoya clearly that her every breath affects him like his own, came to check on her when she was pacing because he knows she only does that when she's stressed or planning and told her he's trying to protect her. Zoya deliberately misunderstand him - and now we know why!</font>

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<font color="#cc00ff">So, what's going to happened now that Zoya can't get away with making Asad mad and distracting him with anger? Do you think he'll let her get away with sneaking out at night and nearly getting herself killed?</font>