FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

amazing ...loving the zoyaan bonding

i think ayaan should tell asad

this whole thing has become dangerous

thanks dear for a early update of my fav asya FF:)

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA.AAA

i cant stop screaming

such an amazing update

so many Cliffy's

u gonna kill me one day

Amazing Story

continue soon

Edited by ...KSGmiAmor... - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Hey Paly that was a brilliant update. Want to read more and can't wait.
Please update soon please please pretty please.
Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

It was amazing update and totally love the curiosity of asad towards knowing rabbart.😆

As asad was feeling jealous from rabart and willing to know the relationship shares between zoya and rabart.

Last but not least, how come zoya will escape from present situation as asad would not let her go without a satisfied reasons and even looking to her hand which is hurted and have scars.

Continue soon as ff is getting more interesting after mention name of NAAS.

Pm me.

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Omg please continue soon! So intense! I loved it!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

"Yes, it is!" Asad roars. "Everything about you is my business! Every breath you take affects me like it's my own!"

This line gave a lot away... Asad really cares for Zoya but she misunderstands him... Asad just doesn't say things clearly because he is Asad...

I loved Mona-Raabert here a lot

superb this was

You my friend are one in a billion... I am always in awe of your work

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Rattyswami

@Rattyswami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Loved it😃 Rohan's silence is hurting more than just him now...but for once in my life I have to agree with the Tiger and the Sher...Zoya is most definitely a 'musibat magnet'...my god wht possessed that girl to try to save Rohan from 10 goons.

She got stabbed!!!!😲O.M.G😲😲 and the wound ended just slightly away from her artery...HEY BHAGWAN...this girl was better off in NY...atleast she wasn't getting physically injured at every turn...

I hope Asad can protect her and pls don't make him FIGHT with her...for the first time realiszing it really hurts her😭 Zoya's emotions are so RAW and ur writing was SUPERB👏

PS:- Can we readers expect two updates this week, to make up for the one we didn't get last week because of the HOLIDAY's...pls pls pls 😉

And a very HAPPY NEW YEAR😃