FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 39

God, love ur zoya. Too good...

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Originally posted by: PalyGirl

omg !!

WONDERFUL CHAPTER DEAR!!

wooow this is well written

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I like Rohan and Malik, too. As I said in my last reply to your reply to my reply to your feedback (whew - that was confusing, wasn't it?) I like my characters to be grey. Real people are neither all good or all bad so why shouldn't written characters also have shades?

Rohan DID come to Zoya's rescue. He knocked over the men who had grabbed Ayaan and were pulling him off the bike. Zoya and Ayaan wouldn't have gotten away if Rohan hadn't done that. He could have easily have just left them to the goons. See? He's so grey that he's willing to take a beating to keep his secrets but also risked getting caught again to help the people who helped him!

Rohan is...complicated.

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

The next chapter is only Asad and Zoya, but no jealousy. These two need to talk out their issues and start working as a team! Isn't that what we all really want?

oh yes finally... 👏 👏 👏 👏