FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
so who caught zoya ??
is it asad or rohan ???
it's so interesting !
continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting... now what does a cricketer so famous & wealthy would want from asya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow tis is fabulous...
Beautifully written...
Totally luv it...
Wonder who is doing tat...
Eagerly waiting fr the next part...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update... Loved how Rohan appreciates Zoya's breakfast... Asad just takes her for granted at times... She deserves some kind words for all the unconditional love she gives everyone around her... Asad's anger wasn't justified.. As usual... Atleast Rohan pointed it out...
Wonder what he is up to...
Looking forward to the next update... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
just love the way u write...
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Posted: 11 years ago
As usual...an amazing story from such a talented writer...

Keep it it coming dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazingly written...i wonder what rohan is upto???
let the mystery begin... 😕
and was that asad who caught her??? 🤢
cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PalyGirl


Fari,

I think you like this story more because it takes place in the Khan Villa. The last story was placed mostly at Zoya or Asad's offices so it didn't connect the family so much. This story is in their house so it feels closer. Najma and Dilshad are also more actively involved, increasing the 'family' feel. But the last mystery was necessary to set up for the next adventure.

Thank you for your feedback!

Paly

Oh yeah, that's probably why. 😆 Not that I didn't like your other story, I did! (: I just like this one better. 😳 Thank you for the response! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. Loved jealous Asad. Zoya figured things out pretty quickly this time. I want to know who walked into the room. I'm guessing its Asad but then i think it could also be Phuphee. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Palygirl, you truly rock!! Fantastic update! I absolutely love how you explain everything and leave no questions unanswered!

Asad Ahmed Khan is in trouble!! 😆 He can run but he can't hide. Ms. Musibat is now his Musibat!! He is so enamored of Zoya and is fighting a losing battle!! You have gradually shown his feelings in the last 2 FFs. Its picking up some speed in this one!!
What's a day in Asad and Zoya's life, without a trip - catch and stare session?! Yup, Asad has frequent practice of catching Zoya and then getting lost in her eyes!! Rohan better watch out and stay away from Zoya!! But alas, how will we get our thriller then.

Zoya's outburst regarding the orphanage and orphans was very poignant! Her pain came through loud and clear. At least she had her Appi and Jeeju, Rohan appears to have none. Asad continues to hurt her unintentionally and then regrets it when he sees her in pain.

OK. What is this guy Rohan up to?? My brain is working overtime trying to figure him out!!

On surface, he appears to be a nice and down-to-earth person, who has endured a lot in life by being an orphan. Then his antics make me wonder if it's two different people or if he is under some duress and is being blackmailed or is negative and a great actor. Waiting eagerly to see how it unfolds.

The 1st part of the breakfast scene was cute and touching at the same time. His explanation of how Zoya served customized pancakes as she loved the Khans was very perceptive.

"Zoya didn't just make pancakes," Rohan continues. "She made exactly what she knew you liked. She shows how much she loves you by making what you want and not just what you need." He nods to Asad's plate. "You're more disciplined than I am, Asad. I could never choose nutrition over love."

Ouch! That last statement hit home! Glad Dilshad was able to deflect it.

The XXX ad piece was interesting. Was that just to get Asad angry or will it tie into a bigger pix? I'll have to wait and watch! Asad did end up hurting Zoya again. Oh boy, is this man gonna pay big time!

Now coming to the part that interests me the most: the mystery element (psst... I am loving the romance and awareness tension between AsYa too)!!

So, our Nancy Drew Zoya figured out that Rohan took her iPad and is also searching the house. Glad you explained about why the iPad was unlocked!! BTW, iPad does display browsing history.

So, I guessed right about the water excuse.😃 Hmm, I ask again. What in the world is this guy up to? He is obviously searching for something. He researched about Zoya and Asad and the K7 incident. Does this tie back to Web of Lies? Is he linked to one of the antagonists, possibly Surita? Her boyfriend was mentioned briefly. But that doesn't make logical sense if he really is Rohan the star! I'll just have to be patient and wait for the updates to see how you unravel this. There's got to be more than meets the eye!!

Towels: how did he spend the evening and night without a towel? That's a clue. The bed seemed untouched too. Was the frill fan that Najma made intact? Where did he spend the night then? Is that why Zoya is smelling the pillows to confirm the sheets are still fresh?

Who caught her? Asad or Rohan? My guess would be Asad!! More impact and another opportunity for the GEM to strike!! He is gonna think she has a crush on Rohan

Did I mention I am loving this?!


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