FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

ooh Rohan mama wht r u up too haan

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

I love your story and writing BUT what could Rohan possbily want in KV? It doen't make sense. Nice update though.

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Yippeee!! I'm so glad you updated!! Thanks for the pm and this wonderful update!! Can't wait to read more.x

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Very nice update. The whole update with Asad warning Rohan n grabbing him by the collar was good. I like this side of Asad where hes ferocious to protect his family.

Brilliantly written n hope Zoya is able to find something n tell Asad about it before any damage is done to any of the Khan family members.

Thanks for the pm n please update soon n pm me for the next part too.

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

every time you write you take the updates to new level just loved it. update had everything it was love , care it had anger and apology . perfect and rohan is bit fishy matter lets see what comes out from your kitty

thanks for pm update soon

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Unres pg 8 for chapter 2

will read nd comment on 3rd one soon😃

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

I love the way Zoya's brains are thinking

The way you portray your characters is the best

sorry for the short comment.. in a hurry

Edited by --Mahima-- - 12 years ago

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Hey ...

I'm absolutely loving the way the story is progressing ...

Gosh ... Asad can be a jerk sometimes !!

I just hope that he apologizes and make it up this time ...

And yes .. The smart and genius Zoya is fab !!

Is that Asad who caught her red handed ?? ;)

Thanks for the pm :)

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MayaB5

@MayaB5

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

I think I look forward to your updates more than anyone else. There are no words for your portrayal of AsaD and Zoya...you write them so true to character👏