Chalo Ghar Chalein: AsYa OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: abhi.sweet

This is the first time i have read any os or ff, di you are amazing and i promise i shall read your ff too ,but it will take time. Loved it.

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks kulfibai...yeah, he not taking any chances😉

Originally posted by: maha70

amazing os. loved it. your other work is also very very good .

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

With his eyes glued to the road, he replied, "no gear-change till we reach home. I don't want to take any more chances.

This line is so frickin' perfect! AAAH!

You know, you've pretty much penned down exactly how I wish the creatives would play out the aftermath of the confrontation in SM, in terms of character reactions etc. I was SO disappointed with how the bitch's major track ended, and how Asad and Zoya just brushed it under the rug :S I'd hate for something like that to happen again because this whole farce would have been very emotionally draining for all the protagonists, particularly I'd like Asad and Zoya to sit down and sort their shit out - these two have a major communication gap between them!

I love how you portrayed Asad's relief and determination, Zoya's awkwardness, Dilshad's concern! I love that you integrated Najma's and Imran's characters here! I must admit when Ayaan made an entry I was like 'oh hell to the no!' - the brat was as oblivious as ever that his words would hurt Asad and Zoya.

Great OS Sangeeta!

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Tanvi. I really wish they will not rush through these healing parts post Zoya's stay at SM

Asad, Zoya and Dilshaad really need to go through introspection and a healing process. I'd hate to see Zoya get all bubbly at the KV again and would also hate for them to move onto the next twist too soon.

I want lots of heart to heart chats between AsYa...

I could care less what SM walas go through😆

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

Sangeeta, doesn't Gul usually do light-hearted tracks after heavy-duty ones? I don't want her to plunge us into the next twist so soon either :(

Yes! Basically, I just want Asad and Zoya in particular, spending LOTS of quality time together! No cheesy romance per se, though I still love it, but rather where they have mature conversations about their relationship, where they stand, what's happened, introspection and healing together like you mentioned! I want a proper Zoya-Dilshad scene too!

I know! I'm afraid Zoe will go back home and be her bubbly self again straight away after a few moments in which she sheds tears - they have to show her portray some level of awkwardness, otherwise it will be very unrealistic! :S

Well for me everybody but AsYa can go bhaard mein, shallow is me 😆

Originally posted by: bheegi

<font color="#3300cc">Thanks vinita...I am hopeful they will give us a memorable milan this time😃</font>

Originally posted by: vinita459

I hope so. I was really looking forward to it, but currently I am not very excited about it. Today I am very angry with zoya. Her character is starting to get on my nerves, even though she was my favorite. Today's episode has really turned me off and not even sure about the 'milan' anymore.

Sorry to take out all my frustration here.

Originally posted by: bheegi

<font color="#3300cc">no problem...it's okay to vent</font>

<font color="#3300cc">For me, the way I look at it - Zoya has gone cuckoo in that pagalkhaana. The moment she leaves that mad house, she will back to our own Zoya</font>

<font color="#3300cc">Anyone who stays in SM for long is bound to go bonkers...don't tae it heart</font>

<font color="#3300cc">That scene was created to get Humeira to have an outburst...nothing else</font>