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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 45

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Fari! This was so cute! 😳

I'm loving the flashbacks. Zoya's birthday and the terrace scene was mesmerizing! Is Zoya in coma or something? 🤔

I guessed by these lines below:

Asad let out the breath he was unconsciously holding. He rubbed his eyes, and went to bed, with a newfound sense of hope that Zoya would wake up soon; for him.

Because after all, a brand-new day is a brand-new hope.

Continue soon! I'm waiting!

Love and hugs, 🤗

Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Part 2-

The third time they met each other.

omg... wow... Zoya's birthday was amazing... I am lost in the stars...

Their first kiss was just like this. On a rainy night.

the first kiss was the best... (p.s. now I want mine to be like this too)

this is on my list of favs now

beautiful work by you

Love you loads Fari ❤️

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome awesome awesome!!! Read both chapters and it was beautiful! I can't wait to finf out how zoya fell into coma! Plz updt soon!

P.s. plz plz plz updt invisible soon! I'm in love with that story! :D

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Awesome flashbacks fari👏
I loved it.
Update soon yaar..

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Baby! :D

Loved the update :D

Kissy wissy :)

Cant wait for the next update :D

Love you! Nisha

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Awesome!!! Read both chapters and it was beautifully narrated through flashbacks!

Thank you for the pm!

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Hmmm...i lyked both the chapters
Especially graveyard n rain parts were my fav..
Beautifully written yaar...
Waitning fr next update
N when r u going to update ur other updates
Pls pm me whenever u update them...u r 1 of mah fav..i lyk ur filmy cutie sweet n lovely narrations

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Farii darling...has someone ever told you how freakin AWESOME you are!

I mean Really! I'm sooo deeply in love with this story...even though I have read some similar stories before as well but this has gotten me HOOKED =)

The rainy kiss was sooo cutee 😳 The scenes and emotions were beautifully narrated by you with no exagerration :) The thing I love most! :)

Continue soon Farri darlingg <33 :) 🤗 Waiting for a YJHD update now. I've been asking you for it from a long time :)