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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

me me :D i was randomly wandering around and you updated 😃

Here i am to paint your thread purple..lol.

I loved the last line- a new day is a day of new hope, such positivity 👏..not that i didn't love the entire chapter..it was well done with present and past, showing how everything reminds asad of zoya and their time together..There is a causal easiness in their relationship which i like 😳

A kiss in the rain ..there is something so romantic about kissing in the rain...so leave it up to Fari to add it to her story 😆

There is alot unsaid still...how Zoe got hurt, what exactly their relationship is right now ? we saw a kiss but a confession ? See, the suspense factors in these ( present- past (flashback) stories i love 😃So wondering how the rest of the flashbacks will play out.

Loved it Fari...Hugggsss 🤗

-Reya <3

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 11 years ago

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

nice part

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Awsome update... 😊

Really like it... ..😊

waiting for nxt part update soon...😊

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parthpathak31

@parthpathak31

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

curious to Know What happned to Zoya😊

Nice story ❤️

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The.Targaryen

@The.Targaryen

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Amazing update<3 <3 <3
the flashback...the kiss too beautiful
but what happened to zoya??
Update soon

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

RES! I'm on my phone!

Unres

I loved it! Fari how do you know my romantic fantasies? Seriously!? I actually wish I was Zoya in this story. It's just so sweet, adorable, cute, amazing and romantic. Like seriously. it's just so dreamy.

I love how he's so soft spoken and shy, yet comfortable with her. It's just adorable. And she seems to take a liking to him as well 😉

I love how she took him up to see the starry night.

And the kiss

Seriously I've been throughout the WHOLE update

And I actually laughed at her calling him Akdu. Asad will be Akdu always. But I love that you incorporated Zoya's confidence here with her getting him to join her in the rain

Please please please update soon.

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

great chapter Fari!!! I really liked the the flashbacks, and then the kiss in the rain!! please reveal what happened to Zoya?? why on earth is she in the hospital... it seems that she's in a coma...but why, though??? continue soon!!!

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

everything is slightly confusing !
but i'm sure it'll all be cleared in the next chapter !
everything was awesome !
i loved the update !
it was a cute update as usual !!
continue soon :)