{|AsYa/KaBhi SS| ~Serendipity~} (Part3-Pg33+Note-Pg47) :) - Page 18

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

everything is slightly confusing !
but i'm sure it'll all be cleared in the next chapter !
everything was awesome !
i loved the update !
it was a cute update as usual !!
continue soon :)

Originally posted by: sowmy18

hey i read the two parts and they are so so so good!

please pm me when you update next!😃

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Part 1-

The first time he saw her.

that was wow... the loved the whole by chance encounter

Second encounter.

beautiful... the whole scene was so well created

the graveyard part was heart touching

the hospital scene was amazing too

I was planning to put my fav lines but copying the whole chapter would be weird

I am addicted to this one

you one day will become a famous author for sure

luv ya

Mahi

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Fari! This was so cute! 😳

I'm loving the flashbacks. Zoya's birthday and the terrace scene was mesmerizing! Is Zoya in coma or something? 🤔

I guessed by these lines below:

Asad let out the breath he was unconsciously holding. He rubbed his eyes, and went to bed, with a newfound sense of hope that Zoya would wake up soon; for him.

Because after all, a brand-new day is a brand-new hope.

Continue soon! I'm waiting!

Love and hugs, 🤗

Mrina

Thanks, Mrina! 🤗 Means a lot! 😃 I hope you keep enjoying it!

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Part 2-

The third time they met each other.

omg... wow... Zoya's birthday was amazing... I am lost in the stars...

Their first kiss was just like this. On a rainy night.

the first kiss was the best... (p.s. now I want mine to be like this too)

this is on my list of favs now

beautiful work by you

Love you loads Fari ❤️

Originally posted by: stereohearts200

Awesome awesome awesome!!! Read both chapters and it was beautiful! I can't wait to finf out how zoya fell into coma! Plz updt soon!

P.s. plz plz plz updt invisible soon! I'm in love with that story! :D

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Awesome flashbacks fari👏
I loved it.
Update soon yaar..

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Baby! :D

Loved the update :D

Kissy wissy :)

Cant wait for the next update :D

Love you! Nisha

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Awesome!!! Read both chapters and it was beautifully narrated through flashbacks!

Thank you for the pm!

Originally posted by: Addu16

Hmmm...i lyked both the chapters
Especially graveyard n rain parts were my fav..
Beautifully written yaar...
Waitning fr next update
N when r u going to update ur other updates
Pls pm me whenever u update them...u r 1 of mah fav..i lyk ur filmy cutie sweet n lovely narrations